列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和重复表达，句子结构不够清晰，建议简化句子，避免重复，并注意时态和冠词的使用。

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list before going to supermarkets because it helps me remember the groceries and household supplies I need, and prevents me from buying unnecessary items.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够连贯，建议使用更准确的时态和句式，避免口语化的重复，增强逻辑性。

範例: Yes, I usually make a list before starting my work. However, emergencies sometimes interrupt my plans, so I cannot always complete everything on the list perfectly, but I always try my best.

建議: 回答内容较好，但表达稍显简单，建议丰富词汇，使用更自然的连接词，使表达更流畅。

範例: I think some people dislike making lists because they feel it restricts their freedom and flexibility. For instance, when engaging in creative work, they may find lists unnecessary and prefer to work spontaneously.

建議: 回答较好，但可以使用更多连接词和丰富词汇，使表达更自然流畅。

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is convenient, versatile, and portable. For example, I can easily add or delete items using the Notes app, which makes it more flexible than using paper.

× And yes, of course I am the person who always making this before going to shopping and and maybe in shopping malls or some supermarket because it can help me remember everything I wanted to buy such as some groceries or some household supplies and avoid helping avoid buying unnecessary items.

✓ And yes, of course I am the person who is always making this before going shopping and maybe in shopping malls or some supermarkets because it can help me remember everything I want to buy such as some groceries or some household supplies and avoid buying unnecessary items.

这里“who always making”缺少助动词，应为“who is always making”，表示现在进行时态。短语“going to shopping”中“to”不应出现，正确用法是“going shopping”。“some supermarket”应为复数“some supermarkets”，因为指多个超市。最后“avoid helping avoid buying”重复且错误，应简化为“avoid buying”。

× And yes, of course I am the person who always making this before going to shopping and and maybe in shopping malls or some supermarket because it can help me remember everything I wanted to buy such as some groceries or some household supplies and avoid helping avoid buying unnecessary items.

✓ And yes, of course I am the person who is always making this before going shopping and maybe in shopping malls or some supermarkets because it can help me remember everything I want to buy such as some groceries or some household supplies and avoid buying unnecessary items.

“some supermarket”应使用复数形式“some supermarkets”，因为指多个超市。

× because it can help me remember everything I wanted to buy such as some groceries or some household supplies and avoid helping avoid buying unnecessary items.

✓ because it can help me remember everything I want to buy such as some groceries or some household supplies and avoid buying unnecessary items.

这里“wanted”使用了过去时，但句意是指现在或一般情况，应该用一般现在时“want”。

× Does it work? Yes, actually. I'm a person who tend to make a list before doing something, but sometimes there is some emergency so that interrupt my plan, so I have to I can't. Like sometimes I can't complete a tab the list perfectly, but I try my best.

✓ Does it work? Yes, actually. I'm a person who tends to make a list before doing something, but sometimes there are some emergencies that interrupt my plan, so I have to, I can't. Sometimes I can't complete the list perfectly, but I try my best.

“who tend”应为第三人称单数形式“who tends”。“there is some emergency”应为复数“there are some emergencies”。“so that interrupt”缺少主语，应为“that interrupt”。“I have to I can't”表达不清，应分开或重组句子。

× but sometimes there is some emergency so that interrupt my plan, so I have to I can't.

✓ but sometimes there are some emergencies that interrupt my plan, so I have to, I can't.

“some emergency”应为复数“some emergencies”，因为后面动词用复数形式“interrupt”。

× And yes, of course I am the person who always making this before going to shopping and and maybe in shopping malls or some supermarket because it can help me remember everything I wanted to buy such as some groceries or some household supplies and avoid helping avoid buying unnecessary items.

✓ And yes, of course I am the person who is always making this before going shopping and maybe in shopping malls or some supermarkets because it can help me remember everything I want to buy such as some groceries or some household supplies and avoid buying unnecessary items.

“going to shopping”中“to”是不必要的，正确表达是“going shopping”。

× Does it work? Yes, actually. I'm a person who tend to make a list before doing something, but sometimes there is some emergency so that interrupt my plan, so I have to I can't.

✓ Does it work? Yes, actually. I'm a person who tends to make a list before doing something, but sometimes there are some emergencies that interrupt my plan, so I have to, I can't.

“so that interrupt”缺少主语，应该用关系代词“that”引导定语从句，且动词用复数形式“interrupt”。

× And yes, of course I am the person who always making this before going to shopping and and maybe in shopping malls or some supermarket because it can help me remember everything I wanted to buy such as some groceries or some household supplies and avoid helping avoid buying unnecessary items.

✓ And yes, of course I am the person who is always making this before going shopping and maybe in shopping malls or some supermarkets because it can help me remember everything I want to buy such as some groceries or some household supplies and avoid buying unnecessary items.

句中“and and”重复，应去掉一个“and”。

× I can use the Note app to add or delete some items in my phone so it is very flexible instead of using paper.

✓ I can use the Note app to add or delete some items on my phone so it is very flexible instead of using paper.

“in my phone”应改为“on my phone”，表示在手机上操作。