列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答不够自然且表达不清晰，句子结构混乱，且没有直接回答问题。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复和语法错误。

範例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer buying things online rather than going to local supermarkets or malls.

建議: 回答内容不连贯，语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议先明确表达观点，然后用具体例子支持，使用连接词使句子连贯。

範例: Yes, I think making a list is very important for managing work. For example, when I work in a team, I usually plan what tasks to do, when to do them, and how to complete them efficiently.

建議: 回答中有语法错误且表达不完整，观点较为简单且带有负面评价。建议用更客观的理由，并补充具体细节。

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to work spontaneously without strict plans.

建議: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议简洁表达观点，并说明原因，使用连接词使句子更连贯。

範例: I used to make lists on my smartphone, but now I prefer writing them on paper because it's more meaningful and convenient for me.

× Actually, I don't use a list to have a shop because I don't really like shopping in the local supermarket or just some small some malls because I don't like to buy something physically, I love buying them.

✓ Actually, I don't use a list to go shopping because I don't really like shopping in the local supermarket or just some small malls because I don't like to buy things physically, I love buying them.

这里'some small some malls'中'some'重复且'malls'应为复数形式，'something'应改为复数'things'，因为指的是不特定的多个物品。

× Actually I think Lister is very important drawing of work times.

✓ Actually, I think lists are very important during work times.

'Lister'应为'lists'，复数形式，且'drawing of work times'表达不正确，应改为'during work times'表示在工作期间。

× For example, when was studying for teamwork, I usually plan a list what I do, when I do and how can I do and some tools to.

✓ For example, when I was studying for teamwork, I usually plan a list of what I do, when I do it, how I can do it, and some tools to use.

句子缺少主语'I'，且'plan a list what I do'结构不完整，应为'plan a list of what I do'，'how can I do'语序错误，应为'how I can do it'。

× Tickled with the problems, so it's very.

✓ I tick off the problems, so it's very helpful.

原句不完整且用词错误，'Tickled with the problems'应为'I tick off the problems'表示勾选问题，'so it's very'后面缺少形容词，补充为'helpful'。

× Where of this problem? I think most people don't like doing this because they are lazy and don't care about the results.

✓ Because of this problem, I think most people don't like doing this because they are lazy and don't care about the results.

'Where of this problem?'语法错误，应为'Because of this problem'表示原因。

× So they would not would not prepare before the scenes and.

✓ So they would not prepare before the scenes.

重复使用'would not'，应去掉一个，句子末尾多余'and'，应删除。

× Actually, in the past 10 I usually make I usually make a list on my smart phone since I had it.

✓ Actually, in the past 10 years, I usually made a list on my smartphone since I had it.

'past 10'缺少单位，应为'past 10 years'，时态应为过去时'made'，'smart phone'合成词为'smartphone'。

× But now I realize that Lister on paper is more meaningful and convenient than it.

✓ But now I realize that lists on paper are more meaningful and convenient than on the phone.

'Lister'应为'lists'复数，'is'应改为'are'与复数主语一致，'than it'表达不清，应改为'than on the phone'。