列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中时态使用不准确，应该使用一般现在时来描述习惯行为。此外，表达不够自然，句子结构有些混乱。建议使用简单明了的句子，避免重复和语法错误。

範例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember what to buy and saves me time.

建議: 回答中时态和语序错误较多，表达不够流畅。建议使用一般现在时，并调整句子结构，使表达更自然。

範例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me know clearly what I need to do each day and improves my efficiency.

建議: 回答中语法错误严重，表达不清晰，逻辑混乱。建议简化句子，明确表达观点，并使用连接词使句子连贯。

範例: I think some people don't like making lists because it makes them feel pressured and restricted. They prefer to do things freely without a fixed plan.

建議: 回答中时态和语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议使用正确的时态和句子结构，表达原因时使用连接词。

範例: Actually, I prefer making lists on paper because writing helps me think about what I need to do. Using my phone doesn't give me enough time to think.

× Yes, I always make a list when I was shopping because it made me feel clearly about what I should buy and save more times for me.

✓ Yes, I always make a list when I am shopping because it makes me feel clear about what I should buy and saves more time for me.

这里的时间状语是现在时态（always），所以主句也应该用现在时态。'was shopping' 应改为 'am shopping'，'made' 改为 'makes'，'save' 改为 'saves'，'more times' 应为 'more time'。

× Yes, this made me feel like I clearly know what should I do in one day and make me work more efficiently.

✓ Yes, this makes me feel like I clearly know what I should do in one day and makes me work more efficiently.

句子描述的是现在的感受，应该用现在时态。'made' 改为 'makes'，'should I do' 语序错误，应为 'I should do'，'make' 改为 'makes'。

× I think because let's make them feel more pressure and they don't like the feeling to be locked by the least, they should more happy with doing whatever they want.

✓ I think because it makes them feel more pressure and they don't like the feeling of being locked by the list; they should be happier doing whatever they want.

'let's make' 用法错误，应为 'it makes'；'to be locked by the least' 应为 'of being locked by the list'；'should more happy' 应为 'should be happier'。句子连接不当，改为分号连接。

× Actually, I make a list on paper more that is because when I was writing Make me, it's helped me to think about what should I do, but using the phone make me have less time to think about it.

✓ Actually, I make a list on paper more because when I am writing, it helps me to think about what I should do, but using the phone makes me have less time to think about it.

'more that is because' 结构错误，改为 'more because'；'when I was writing Make me' 语序和内容错误，改为 'when I am writing'；'it's helped' 改为 'it helps'；'should I do' 语序错误，应为 'I should do'；'make me have' 改为 'makes me have'。