列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了主要观点，但语法和表达不够自然，且有重复和语法错误。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇。

範例: I usually don't make a list when I shop because I tend to procrastinate. Also, I find it difficult to plan exactly what I need, so my thoughts are often disorganized.

建議: 回答不完整且有语法错误，表达不清晰。建议完整回答问题，使用连贯的句子，并避免重复。

範例: My parents often ask me to make a clear plan for my holidays or studies, but it doesn't work well because I find it hard to follow specific steps.

建議: 回答表达了观点，但语言不够准确，且有重复和语法错误。建议使用更准确的表达，避免重复，并丰富细节。

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they find following steps one by one boring, which makes them lose interest in completing tasks.

建議: 回答中有重复和表达不清晰的问题。建议简洁表达观点，避免重复，并说明原因。

範例: I prefer making lists on paper because using my phone distracts me with games and other apps, so paper helps me stay focused and be more efficient.

× So make a list is very hard for me and I'm poor at plan something or make some specific plan for what I need.

✓ So making a list is very hard for me and I'm poor at planning something or making some specific plans for what I need.

这里“make a list”作为主语时，应使用动名词形式“making a list”。另外，“plan something”应改为“planning something”，保持动词形式一致。最后，“make some specific plan”应改为“making some specific plans”，名词复数形式更合适。

× My mindset is always mess messing.

✓ My mindset is always messy.

“mess”是名词，形容词形式应为“messy”，用来描述“mindset”。“mess messing”是错误的表达。

× Well, every time my mother and father always require me to have a clear plan for my holiday or for my daily study, but it it doesn't work well 'cause I I can't follow the the specific steps and my.

✓ Well, every time my mother and father require me to have a clear plan for my holiday or for my daily study, but it doesn't work well because I can't follow the specific steps.

句中“it it”和“I I”是重复错误，应删除重复部分。句尾“and my”不完整，应删除。

× 'Cause different people's minds are different, some people may maybe not like to do something step by step.

✓ Because different people's minds are different, some people may not like to do something step by step.

“may maybe”重复使用情态动词，应去掉其中一个。

× It will be boring for them and they will lose the interesting to do them to do it.

✓ It will be boring for them and they will lose interest in doing it.

“lose the interesting”错误，应为“lose interest”。“to do them to do it”重复且不通顺，应改为“in doing it”。

× I prefer to make the list on my paper 'cause when I make the list on the phone, I will always be distracted and tend to play games or look look for an look for another continent.

✓ I prefer to make the list on paper because when I make the list on the phone, I am always distracted and tend to play games or look for another content.

“on my paper”应为“on paper”，表示用纸。重复“look look for an look for”应删去多余部分。最后“continent”应为“content”，意思是内容。

× So make make the paper it, it will be efficient, it will be much more efficient.

✓ So making the list on paper will be efficient; it will be much more efficient.

“make make the paper it”表达不清，应改为“making the list on paper”。句子结构需调整使其通顺。