列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中有语法错误和拼写错误，如“knees”应为“notes”，以及“before I shopping”应为“before I go shopping”。建议注意基本语法结构，避免拼写错误，同时回答应更简洁自然。

範例: Yes, I usually make a list on my phone before I go shopping. This helps me remember what I need and avoid buying unnecessary things.

建議: 回答中表达较为清晰，但句子结构不够连贯，且有语法错误，如“there's always things”应为“there are always things”。建议使用连接词使表达更流畅。

範例: No, I don't usually make a list for work. I used to, but since unexpected things often happen, I had to change my plans frequently, so I stopped making lists.

建議: 回答内容较好，但存在人称混用问题，如“my mind”应为“their mind”。建议注意人称一致，并尝试使用更多连接词丰富表达。

範例: Maybe some people believe they have good memories and can remember everything. Therefore, they think making lists is a waste of time and energy.

建議: 回答中有多处语法和表达错误，如“will with you some lot apps”不通顺，建议加强语法学习，使用更准确的表达方式，并注意句子连贯性。

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because there are many apps and calendars that make planning easy and convenient. They can also send reminders so I don't forget important things.

× Yes, I usually make knees before I shopping.

✓ Yes, I usually make lists before I go shopping.

这里'shopping'前面缺少动词，应该用动词短语'go shopping'。另外，'knees'应为'lists'，是拼写错误。

× Yes, I usually make knees before I shopping.

✓ Yes, I usually make lists before I go shopping.

'knees'是错误拼写，正确应为'lists'，表示购物清单，且应为复数形式。

× Yes, I usually make knees before I shopping.

✓ Yes, I usually make lists before I go shopping.

'shopping'作为动名词时，前面应有动词'go'，构成固定短语'go shopping'。

× I will need what I need to buy on my phone note app so that it can prevent me from wasting my time and money on unnecessary items.

✓ I will note what I need to buy on my phone note app so that it can prevent me from wasting my time and money on unnecessary items.

'need'用错，应该用'verb note'表示记录，'need'是动词，语义不符。

× No I don't. I used to make a list for my plan but soon I found that there's always things going on and I had to change my time plan all the time so I end up giving it up.

✓ No, I don't. I used to make a list for my plan but soon I found that there are always things going on and I had to change my time plan all the time so I ended up giving it up.

'there's'应改为'there are'，因为'things'是复数。'end'应为过去式'ended'，与前文时态一致。

× No I don't. I used to make a list for my plan but soon I found that there's always things going on and I had to change my time plan all the time so I end up giving it up.

✓ No, I don't. I used to make a list for my plan but soon I found that there are always things going on and I had to change my time plan all the time so I ended up giving it up.

'there's'是单数形式，'things'是复数，应该用'there are'。

× No I don't. I used to make a list for my plan but soon I found that there's always things going on and I had to change my time plan all the time so I end up giving it up.

✓ No, I don't. I used to make a list for my plan but soon I found that there are always things going on and I had to change my time plan all the time so I ended up giving it up.

'end'应使用过去式'ended'，因为前文使用了过去时态。

× Maybe because they think they have good memories so they can keep everything in my mind.

✓ Maybe because they think they have good memories so they can keep everything in their mind.

前文主语是'they'，后文代词应保持一致，不能用'my'，应改为'their'。

× I will with you some lot apps or calendars to make a plan because it's easy and convenient.

✓ I will use some apps or calendars to make a plan because it's easy and convenient.

'will with you'结构错误，应该用动词'use'表示使用。

× I will with you some lot apps or calendars to make a plan because it's easy and convenient.

✓ I will use some apps or calendars to make a plan because it's easy and convenient.

'some lot apps'中'lot'用法错误，正确表达是'some apps'。