列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: In English (Cambodia), try to make your answer clearer and more natural by directly answering the question first, then adding details. Avoid confusing phrases and grammar mistakes. For example, say "Yes, I make a list when I shop because my mom writes it for me or buys things for her."

範例: Yes, I make a list when I shop because my mom usually writes it for me or buys some items herself.

建議: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. In English (Cambodia), try to answer the question directly and fully. Use correct grammar and explain if the list works or not. For example, say "I make a list for my mom to help her organize tasks, and it works well."

範例: I make a list for my mom to help her remember things, and it works well.

建議: Your answer is confusing and has grammar errors. In English (Cambodia), try to give a clear reason with simple sentences. For example, say "Some people don't like making lists because they forget or find it difficult."

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they forget to make them or think it's unnecessary.

建議: Your answer is clear but can be improved by adding linking words and more details. In English (Cambodia), say "I prefer to make a list on paper because it is easier to find than on my phone."

範例: I prefer to make a list on paper because it is easier to find and use than on my phone.

× Yes, I only make a list because when I go to shop my mom write it for me or buy something for her.

✓ Yes, I only make a list because when I go shopping, my mom writes it for me or buys something for her.

The verbs 'write' and 'buy' need to agree with the singular subject 'my mom', so they should be 'writes' and 'buys'. Also, 'go to shop' should be 'go shopping' to use the correct verb form after 'go'.

× I make a list for my mom because she have.

✓ I make a list for my mom because she has one.

The verb 'have' must agree with the singular subject 'she', so it should be 'has'. Also, the sentence is incomplete without an object; adding 'one' clarifies the meaning.

× I think they forgot to make a list because Liz can have them when they are forgot to buy something and anything.

✓ I think they forget to make a list because they can have problems when they forget to buy something.

The pronoun 'them' is unclear and unnecessary here. 'Are forgot' is incorrect; the correct form is 'forget'. Also, 'something and anything' is redundant; 'something' suffices.

× I prefer to make a list on paper because when I make it on phone it's difficult to find.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because when I make it on my phone, it's difficult to find.

The phrase 'on phone' is missing a possessive determiner; it should be 'on my phone' to be grammatically correct.