列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it could be more concise and natural. Avoid repeating similar ideas and try to use linking words to connect your points smoothly. For example, instead of saying 'groceries that I'm lacking in my house and that I need for that week,' you could say 'groceries I need for the week.'

範例: Yes, I usually make a list before shopping because it helps me remember the groceries I need for the week. This way, I avoid forgetting important items and save time at the store.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but could be improved by correcting grammar and using linking words for coherence. Also, try to be more specific about how the list helps you. For example, explain what kind of tasks you manage and how the list improves your productivity.

範例: Yes, I regularly make a to-do list for my work because it helps me organize my tasks and meet deadlines. Moreover, it allows me to track updates and stay focused throughout the day.

建議: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and precise. Avoid vague phrases like 'can say a natural instinct' and improve sentence structure. Also, explain the idea about forgetting notes more clearly. Use linking words to connect your ideas.

範例: I'm not sure, but I think some people prefer not to make lists because they have a good memory and can remember things easily. Also, sometimes writing notes can be ineffective if they forget to check them later.

建議: Your answer is relevant but could be more concise and natural. Avoid awkward phrases like 'In that phone I have a WhatsApp where it provides you the facility.' Instead, explain clearly why you prefer your phone and mention specific features. Use linking words to improve flow.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because apps like WhatsApp let me quickly note down everything I need. Additionally, I can set reminders to help me remember important tasks or events.

× I would make a list of groceries that I'm lacking in my house and that I need for that week.

✓ I would make a list of groceries that I lack in my house and that I need for that week.

The phrase 'I'm lacking' is incorrect because 'lack' is a stative verb and is not used in the present continuous form. The correct form is the simple present 'I lack'.

× I regularly make A to do list for my work and it helps me to clarify the task that I have to do on time and it helps me to keep up with the updates regularly.

✓ I regularly make a to-do list for my work and it helps me to clarify the tasks that I have to do on time and it helps me to keep up with the updates regularly.

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' and 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list'. Also, 'the task' should be plural 'the tasks' to match the context of multiple tasks. Articles and noun forms need to be correct for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Additionally, whenever they write it on the notes, they might get forgotten.

✓ Additionally, whenever they write it on notes, it might get forgotten.

The pronoun 'they' is incorrectly used to refer to 'it' (the thing written). The subject of 'might get forgotten' should be 'it' (the note), not 'they'. Also, 'on the notes' should be 'on notes' as 'notes' is plural and general here.

× In that phone I have a WhatsApp where it provides you the facility of noting down each and everything that you might have in your head, and you can also use a reminder to schedule some events prior.

✓ On that phone, I have WhatsApp which provides you the facility of noting down each and everything that you might have in your head, and you can also use a reminder to schedule some events in advance.

The phrase 'In that phone' should be 'On that phone' because apps are on devices. 'a WhatsApp' is incorrect; 'WhatsApp' is a proper noun and does not take an article. 'where it provides' should be 'which provides' to refer to the app. 'schedule some events prior' is incomplete; 'in advance' is the correct phrase.