列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议加强语法基础，避免重复和不必要的表达，回答应更简洁自然。

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need to buy and saves time.

建議: 回答语法错误较多，表达不连贯，建议练习正确的时态和句子结构，回答时要条理清晰，避免模糊表达。

範例: Yes, I make a to-do list before starting work. It helps me stay organized, and I feel accomplished when I complete all tasks.

建議: 回答中语法错误明显，且用词不当，建议使用更合适的词汇表达原因，避免主观评价，表达更客观。

範例: Some people may not like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to work spontaneously.

建議: 回答表达不完整且语法错误较多，建议练习完整句子表达，注意介词和词序，表达清晰。

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient and I can access it anytime and anywhere.

× I make a list when I shop because I can easily to find or buy something when I buy.

✓ I make a list when I shop because I can easily find or buy something when I buy.

动词后面不需要加不定式的“to”，在这里“can”后面直接接动词原形“find”。

× After I buy something, I will deliver something in my lips.

✓ After I buy something, I will deliver something with my lips.

介词使用错误，表达用嘴唇做动作应使用介词“with”。

× I will make a lift before I working, then I will after I finish the work I will deliver it in my paper.

✓ I will make a list before I work, then after I finish the work I will deliver it on my paper.

动词“work”应使用原形，且“make a lift”应为“make a list”，介词“in”应改为“on”表示在纸上。

× then I will after I finish the work I will deliver it in my paper.

✓ then after I finish the work I will deliver it on my paper.

介词“in”用错，表示在纸上应使用“on”。

× Then after finish the job I will feel a sense of achievement.

✓ Then after finishing the job I will feel a sense of achievement.

“after”后面应接动名词形式“finishing”，而不是动词原形。

× In my opinion, some people doesn't like making this course because they are lazy and they don't to do more job.

✓ In my opinion, some people don't like making this course because they are lazy and they don't want to do more work.

主谓不一致，“some people”应搭配“don't”，且“don't to do”错误，应为“don't want to do”，“job”应改为“work”更合适。

× I prefer to make a list on my than on the paper because it can stay me more organised in on my.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone than on paper because it helps me stay more organised.

介词使用错误，“on my”不完整，应为“on my phone”，且“stay me”错误，应为“helps me stay”，去掉多余的“in on my”。

× I can take my Everything Everywhere.

✓ I can take everything with me everywhere.

代词使用错误，“my Everything Everywhere”不合适，应改为“everything with me everywhere”。