列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，存在重复和语义不清的问题。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免使用口头语“umm”，并注意句子结构的完整性。

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember the items I need. For instance, I usually write the list on my phone or in a small notebook to avoid forgetting anything.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，且有重复。建议使用正确的时态和句子结构，明确回答问题，并避免口头语。

範例: Yes, I always make a to-do list for my work because it helps me remember my tasks. I usually write it on my phone or in a notebook, which makes my work more organized.

建議: 回答内容不相关且语法错误严重，表达混乱。建议理解问题后，给出合理的理由，并使用简单清晰的句子表达。

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming and prefer to remember things naturally.

建議: 回答中语法和表达不准确，句子不完整。建议明确表达偏好，使用正确的形容词和句子结构，避免模糊表达。

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone or paper because it is convenient and helps me remember things easily.

× Oh, of course, when I walking I would like to make a plan to remember I need to do for example, uh, I usually write a list on my phone or a notebook so that I don't get anything in person.

✓ Oh, of course, when I am walking I would like to make a plan to remember what I need to do. For example, uh, I usually write a list on my phone or a notebook so that I don't forget anything in person.

这里动词walking缺少助动词am，正确的进行时态结构是am/is/are + 动词-ing形式。应使用"when I am walking"。

× I think some people doesn't like me to live because it is very difficult and complete complex, especially when you are working so hardly and biting.

✓ I think some people don't like to live like me because it is very difficult and completely complex, especially when you are working so hard and biting.

主语some people是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式don't而不是doesn't。

× I think some people doesn't like me to live because it is very difficult and complete complex, especially when you are working so hardly and biting.

✓ I think some people don't like to live like me because it is very difficult and completely complex, especially when you are working so hard and biting.

形容词complete应改为副词completely修饰complex；hardly是副词，意思是“几乎不”，应改为hard表示“努力地”。

× I think some people doesn't like me to live because it is very difficult and complete complex, especially when you are working so hardly and biting.

✓ I think some people don't like to live like me because it is very difficult and completely complex, especially when you are working so hard and biting.

这里的me用法不当，应使用不定式结构或表达“像我一样生活”，改为"to live like me"。

× For example, I usually write the list on my phone or a small notebook to avoid getting everything.

✓ For example, I usually write the list on my phone or a small notebook to avoid forgetting anything.

短语"avoid getting everything"不合适，应使用"avoid forgetting anything"，避免使用错误的介词搭配。

× I usually write a list on my phone or a notebook so that I don't get anything in person.

✓ I usually write a list on my phone or a notebook so that I don't forget anything in person.

动词get用法错误，应使用forget表示“忘记”，这里是介词搭配错误。

× Yes I do, I would like to make this on paper or my phone because I can comfortable and easy to take care especially I really forget.

✓ Yes I do, I would like to make this on paper or my phone because it is comfortable and easy to take care of, especially when I really forget.

形容词comfortable应加系动词is；短语easy to take care应为easy to take care of，缺少介词of。