列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和表达不够自然，建议注意动词形式和句子结构，使表达更流畅。

範例: I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me keep my budget clear and find items more quickly and easily.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，句子不连贯，建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态和表达方式。

範例: I always make a list for my work because it helps me achieve my goals and complete my tasks efficiently.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，建议使用更自然的表达方式，并避免重复。

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it troublesome and believe it is not useful.

建議: 回答内容较完整，但句子较简单且重复，建议使用更多连接词和丰富词汇，使表达更自然流畅。

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's a convenient tool that I can carry everywhere and use easily, which makes organizing tasks much simpler.

× Make a list can help me to keep my budget clear and it can help me to find more things more quickly and easily.

✓ Making a list can help me to keep my budget clear and it can help me to find more things more quickly and easily.

动词短语作主语时，应该使用动名词形式，即动词加 -ing。这里的 'Make a list' 应改为 'Making a list'。

× It was very well make a list in my world can help me achieve my target and help me to make my work very well.

✓ Making a list in my work can help me achieve my target and help me to do my work very well.

句子中 'It was very well make a list in my world' 结构不正确，且时态不合适。应使用现在时态表达习惯行为，且 'make a list' 应改为动名词形式 'Making a list'。另外，'world' 应为 'work'。

× Because some people think making lists are very, very troublesome.

✓ Because some people think making lists is very, very troublesome.

主语 'making lists' 是单数概念，谓语动词应使用单数形式 'is'，而不是复数 'are'。

× And I think some people may think make a list is unuseful, so they don't make a list.

✓ And I think some people may think making a list is useless, so they don't make a list.

动词 'think' 后接动名词作宾语时，应使用动名词形式 'making'。另外，'unuseful' 不是常用词，建议用 'useless'。

× Phone is a convenient tool in our life.

✓ A phone is a convenient tool in our life.

单数可数名词前需要冠词，这里 'Phone' 应加不定冠词 'A'。