列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中有一些词汇使用不准确，句子结构不够清晰，导致表达不自然且难以理解。建议你使用更简单明了的句子，直接回答问题，并用具体例子支持你的观点。

範例: I usually make a shopping list when I go on a trip to make sure I don't forget anything important. However, for daily shopping, I usually buy things spontaneously without a list.

建議: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和用词有误，影响了表达的流畅性。建议注意语法正确性，使用连贯的句子，并用连接词使回答更自然。

範例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me avoid missing any tasks. Whenever I finish a task, I tick it off, which improves my work efficiency.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清的问题，建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，避免使用不恰当的短语，使表达更自然。

範例: Some people think making lists takes too much time. They are confident they can finish their tasks without writing them down, so they prefer to focus directly on their work.

建議: 你的回答表达了观点，但有些句子结构不够自然，且逻辑连接稍显混乱。建议使用更连贯的句子，并清晰表达对比关系。

範例: I prefer making lists on paper because it's easier to read and helps me focus better. On the other hand, if I use my phone, I often get distracted by other apps and end up playing games instead of checking my list.

× It depends on saturation.

✓ It depends on the situation.

这里的'saturation'用词不当，应该是'situation'（情况）。这是词汇选择错误，不属于语法错误，但为了表达清晰，需更换词汇。

× They never impact extension items.

✓ They never impact extra items.

'extension items'表达不准确，应该用'extra items'（额外的物品）。同样是词汇选择问题，非语法错误，但为了表达准确需修改。

× For a trip I will make a list to avoid missing anything, but for ordinary daily shop I buy things as I placed without making a list.

✓ For a trip, I will make a list to avoid missing anything, but for ordinary daily shopping, I buy things as I please without making a list.

'daily shop'应为'daily shopping'，'as I placed'应为'as I please'。这是词汇和表达错误，需改正以符合习惯用法。

× I do need a make list when working as it helps to me avoid missing any tasks.

✓ I do need to make a list when working as it helps me avoid missing any tasks.

'a make list'应为'to make a list'，'helps to me avoid'应为'helps me avoid'。动词不定式和介词使用错误。

× Whenever, whenever I finished a task, I put a tick next to it which contributes to to improving my working efficiency to.

✓ Whenever I finish a task, I put a tick next to it which contributes to improving my working efficiency.

'Whenever, whenever'重复，应去掉一个；'finished'应为现在时'finish'以保持时态一致；'contributes to to improving'多余的'to'需删除；句尾多余的'to'应去掉。

× Some individuals perceive list making as time consuming.

✓ Some individuals perceive list making as time-consuming.

'time consuming'作为形容词应连字符连接，形成复合形容词'time-consuming'。

× They feel confident to finish tasks without writing them down.

✓ They feel confident about finishing tasks without writing them down.

'feel confident to do'用法不当，正确表达是'feel confident about doing'。

× They would rather use their time to deep straight into their works.

✓ They would rather use their time to dive straight into their work.

'deep straight into their works'表达错误，正确应为'dive straight into their work'。'work'不可数，且动词用'dive'。

× I prefer making this on the paper.

✓ I prefer making this on paper.

'on the paper'中'the'不必要，习惯用法是'on paper'。

× By contrast, if I make a list on my phone, I'm not distracted by other things on it when I check the list, ending up playing with the phone instead.

✓ By contrast, if I make a list on my phone, I get distracted by other things on it when I check the list, ending up playing with the phone instead.

原句表达与意思不符，'I'm not distracted'应为'I get distracted'，否则后半句逻辑不通。