列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时语言不够自然，表达不够清晰，且有语法错误。建议使用更自然的表达方式，避免重复和不完整的句子。

範例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to be spontaneous and decide what to buy on the spot.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，明确表达原因，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

範例: Usually, I don't make a list for my work because I feel too tired. Even if I make one, unexpected tasks often come up and interrupt me.

建議: 回答重复且表达不流畅，语法错误较多。建议避免重复，使用更准确的词汇和句式，清晰表达观点。

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it useless or too troublesome, especially if they are lazy like me.

建議: 回答较为自然，但存在语法错误和表达不够简洁的问题。建议注意动词形式和句子简洁性，提高表达流畅度。

範例: Although I don't usually make lists, if I have to, I prefer using my phone because it's convenient and I can check the list anytime.

× I don't really like to use a tab.

✓ I don't really like using a tab.

动词后面接动名词（-ing形式）表示喜欢或不喜欢做某事，'like to use'虽然也可以，但在口语中更常用'like using'。这里根据习惯用法改为'like using'。

× I'm a kind of people, like a bit spontaneous, so.

✓ I'm a kind of person, a bit spontaneous, so.

'a kind of'后面应接单数名词，'people'是复数，应该改为单数'person'。

× I'm not usually make a list,

✓ I don't usually make a list,

'usually'是频率副词，放在助动词后，否定句中应使用助动词'do'，而不是直接用动词原形'make'。

× I'm not usually make a list,

✓ I'm not usually making a list,

如果用进行时态，'usually'一般不和进行时连用，改为一般现在时更合适。

× I'm not usually make a list,

✓ I don't usually make a list,

正确表达习惯动作时，使用一般现在时，否定句用助动词'do not'，动词用原形。

× I don't make a make a list because I'm too tired to list this everything I have to work

✓ I don't make a list because I'm too tired to list everything I have to work on

'make a make a list'重复，应删去一个'make'；'list this everything'中'this'多余，应删去；'have to work'后缺少介词'on'，表示对工作的列举。

× there's always some other thing bother me to do this.

✓ there's always some other thing bothering me from doing this.

'bother me to do this'表达不正确，应使用动名词形式'bothering me'，并用介词'from'表示阻止。

× So I think that's the that's the main reason people don't like it make the list.

✓ So I think that's the main reason people don't like to make the list.

'like it make the list'结构错误，'like'后应接动词不定式'to make'，'it'多余，应删去。

× I'm not usually make a list, but if I have to say I'd like to list something in my phone

✓ I don't usually make a list, but if I have to say, I'd like to list something on my phone

否定句中应使用助动词'do not'，'in my phone'应改为'on my phone'，表示在手机上操作。