列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“prefer to choosing”应为“prefer choosing”，以及“what Kai chase my eyes”表达不清晰。建议简化句子结构，使用更自然的表达方式，并避免重复和冗余。

範例: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop. For me, shopping is a relaxing activity, so I prefer to choose things spontaneously based on what catches my eye rather than following a strict list.

建議: 回答中有语法错误，如“I’m not a person who enjoy”应为“enjoys”，且表达略显重复。建议使用更连贯的句子，并用连接词使内容更流畅。

範例: Not very often, because I don't enjoy planning much and prefer to work flexibly. However, when I have many urgent tasks at the office, I make a list to help me organize my work and finish everything on time.

建議: 回答中存在语法和表达不清晰的问题，如“this thing helps me helps them”不合逻辑。建议简化句子，明确表达观点，并使用连接词使内容连贯。

範例: I think some people dislike making lists because they find it stressful and prefer to work spontaneously instead of following a strict plan. Others believe they can complete their tasks on time without making lists, which helps them work more effectively.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和重复，如“because I have my phone with I always have it with me”和“not for and not forget it later”。建议简化表达，避免重复，并使用更自然的句子结构。

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me, while paper and pen are not always available. This way, I can quickly write down any ideas and avoid forgetting them later.

× I prefer to choosing things spontaneously.

✓ I prefer choosing things spontaneously.

动词prefer后面接动名词形式choosing，而不是不定式to choosing。这里应该去掉to，直接用动名词。

× And it makes me relaxing and fine to pick items based on what Kai chase my eyes, not following a strict list.

✓ And it makes me relaxed and fine to pick items based on what catches my eyes, not following a strict list.

这里的relaxing用错了，应该用形容词relaxed表示感受。Kai chase my eyes语法错误，应该是what catches my eyes，主语是what，动词catch第三人称单数形式catches。

× Kai chase my eyes

✓ what catches my eyes

主语是what，属于第三人称单数，动词catch应加s变成catches。

× I'm not a person who enjoy planning.

✓ I'm not a person who enjoys planning.

关系代词who指代单数person，动词enjoy应加s变成enjoys。

× when I have a lot of work to do office urgent situations

✓ when I have a lot of work to do in urgent office situations

短语中缺少介词in，表示“在紧急的办公室情况中”。

× And this thing helps me helps them to work more effectively.

✓ And this helps them to work more effectively.

句子中重复使用了helps me和helps them，且me不合适，应删去me，保持句子简洁。

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because I have my phone with I always have it with me, whereas paper and pen are not always easy to get.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always have it with me, whereas paper and pen are not always easy to get.

原句中“because I have my phone with I always have it with me”结构混乱，重复且不通顺，应删去多余部分，保持句子通顺。

× This way, whenever I get an idea, I can write it down on my phone immediately and not for and not forget it later.

✓ This way, whenever I get an idea, I can write it down on my phone immediately and not forget it later.

句中“and not for and not forget”重复且多余，应删去“for and not”，保持句子简洁正确。