列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear but can be improved by correcting grammar and making it more natural. Use plural forms correctly and avoid redundancy. For example, say 'I make a list when I shop because it helps me remember everything and ensures I don't forget anything.'

範例: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me remember everything I need and prevents me from forgetting anything.

建議: Try to use correct tense and sentence structure. Instead of 'I always used to make timetable of my study', say 'I always make a study timetable'. Also, clarify your points with linking words for coherence.

範例: Definitely, I make a list of my work. As a student, I always make a study timetable, and it helps me study all my subjects more clearly.

建議: Your answer is a bit unclear and could be more specific. Explain why people prefer mobile over lists and use linking words to connect ideas. For example, 'In the modern era, many people prefer using their mobile phones to organise tasks, so they don't like making traditional lists on paper.'

範例: In the modern era, many people prefer using their mobile phones to organise tasks, so they don't like making traditional lists on paper.

建議: Your answer has grammatical errors and is a bit confusing. Try to make it clearer and more natural. For example, 'I prefer making lists on my mobile phone because I always have it with me. Sometimes, if I forget my paper list, I might forget important things, but with my phone, this doesn't happen.'

範例: I prefer making lists on my mobile phone because I always have it with me. Sometimes, if I forget my paper list, I might forget important things, but with my phone, this doesn't happen.

× I make list when I shop because it helped me to remember my all things and with the help of list I not forget my anything while I am shopping.

✓ I make a list when I shop because it helps me to remember all my things and with the help of the list I do not forget anything while I am shopping.

The word 'list' is countable and singular here, so it needs the article 'a'. 'Helped' is past tense but the context is present, so it should be 'helps'. 'My all things' is incorrect; it should be 'all my things'. 'I not forget my anything' is incorrect; it should be 'I do not forget anything'. Also, 'with the help of list' needs 'the' before 'list'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I make list when I shop because it helped me to remember my all things and with the help of list I not forget my anything while I am shopping.

✓ I make a list when I shop because it helps me to remember all my things and with the help of the list I do not forget anything while I am shopping.

The verb 'helped' is in past tense but the sentence describes a habitual action, so present tense 'helps' is appropriate.

× Definitely, I make a list of my work. Well, I'm a student and I always used to make timetable of my study and it helped me to study me all subject very clearly.

✓ Definitely, I make a list of my work. Well, I'm a student and I always use to make a timetable of my study and it helps me to study all subjects very clearly.

'Timetable' is countable and singular, so it needs the article 'a'. 'Used to' is for past habits; since the context is present, 'use to' is better. 'Helped' should be 'helps' to match present tense. 'Study me all subject' is incorrect; it should be 'study all subjects'. These corrections align the sentence with proper grammar and meaning.

× Definitely, I make a list of my work. Well, I'm a student and I always used to make timetable of my study and it helped me to study me all subject very clearly.

✓ Definitely, I make a list of my work. Well, I'm a student and I always use to make a timetable of my study and it helps me to study all subjects very clearly.

'Used to' indicates past habits, but the speaker refers to a current habit, so 'use to' is more appropriate. Also, 'helped' should be 'helps' to reflect present tense.

× Well, this is modern era and in these current times people give more preference to making decisions on mobile, so that's why they don't like making lists.

✓ Well, this is the modern era and in these current times people give more preference to making decisions on their mobile phones, so that's why they don't like making lists.

'Modern era' needs the definite article 'the'. 'On mobile' is vague; it should be 'on their mobile phones' to specify the device. These changes improve clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Well, this is modern era and in these current times people give more preference to making decisions on mobile, so that's why they don't like making lists.

✓ Well, this is the modern era and in these current times people give more preference to making decisions on their mobile phones, so that's why they don't like making lists.

The phrase 'modern era' requires the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific period. Also, 'mobile' should be specified as 'mobile phones' with possessive pronoun 'their' for clarity.

× Well, I also give more preference to making lists on my mobile phone because I mobile mobile phone always in my pocket.

✓ Well, I also give more preference to making lists on my mobile phone because I always have my mobile phone in my pocket.

The original sentence is missing the verb 'have' and repeats 'mobile' unnecessarily. The correct preposition is 'in my pocket'. These corrections make the sentence grammatically correct and clear.

× So that's why sometimes if I forget any paper list I forget to buy my important things in.

✓ So that's why sometimes if I forget any paper list, I forget to buy my important things.

The phrase 'buy my important things in' is incorrect and unnecessary. The sentence is clearer and grammatically correct without 'in'. Also, a comma is needed after the conditional clause for proper sentence structure.

× With the mobile I did not.

✓ With the mobile, I do not.

The phrase 'I did not' is incomplete and uses past tense incorrectly. The intended meaning is present tense negative, so 'I do not' is appropriate. Adding a comma after 'mobile' improves readability.