列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy and improving sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details.

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me choose the products I need easily and saves time. Moreover, it ensures I don't forget anything important.

建議: Focus on clarity and grammar. Use proper sentence structure and linking words to explain how making lists helps your work. Avoid vague phrases and be specific about the benefits.

範例: Yes, I make lists for my work using my phone's notes and alarms, as well as writing in my diary. This helps me stay organized and complete tasks efficiently.

建議: Improve your answer by using clearer language and correct grammar. Provide a direct topic sentence and explain reasons logically with linking words.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to work spontaneously. Additionally, they might feel too lazy to stay organized.

建議: Make your answer more coherent by using linking words and clearer sentence structure. Avoid unnecessary repetition and be specific about why you prefer your phone over paper.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is always with me, making it easy and convenient to check my shopping list anytime. I find it more practical than using paper.

× I think making the list while shopping makes it easy for me to choose the product and the things that I want to buy from store.

✓ I think making a list while shopping makes it easy for me to choose the products and the things that I want to buy from the store.

The phrase 'making the list' should be 'making a list' because it refers to any list, not a specific one already known. Also, 'product' should be plural 'products' to match 'things' and the context of multiple items. 'From store' needs the definite article 'the' to become 'from the store' as it refers to a specific place.

× I think making the list while shopping makes it easy for me to choose the product and the things that I want to buy from store.

✓ I think making a list while shopping makes it easy for me to choose the products and the things that I want to buy from the store.

The preposition 'from' should be followed by the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place, so 'from store' should be 'from the store'.

× I have write some of the items in one of my diary to make the thing gone easy and it will help me a lot while I was working.

✓ I have written some of the items in one of my diaries to make things easier and it helps me a lot while I am working.

The verb 'write' after 'have' should be in past participle form 'written'. 'Diary' should be plural 'diaries' to indicate one among many. 'Make the thing gone easy' is incorrect; it should be 'make things easier' for clarity and correctness. Also, 'while I was working' should be 'while I am working' to maintain present tense consistency.

× I have write some of the items in one of my diary to make the thing gone easy and it will help me a lot while I was working.

✓ I have written some of the items in one of my diaries to make things easier and it helps me a lot while I am working.

'Diary' should be plural 'diaries' because it refers to one among multiple diaries. 'Thing' should be plural 'things' to match the context.

× I have write some of the items in one of my diary to make the thing gone easy and it will help me a lot while I was working.

✓ I have written some of the items in one of my diaries to make things easier and it helps me a lot while I am working.

The phrase 'while I was working' should be in present tense 'while I am working' to match the ongoing action and context.

× I think that meeting makes everyone organized and some of the things can happen to be too lazy person so they don't want to get organized sometimes.

✓ I think that making lists helps everyone stay organized, but some people can be too lazy, so they don't want to get organized sometimes.

The original sentence has unclear structure and word choice. 'Meeting' should be 'making lists'. 'Some of the things can happen to be too lazy person' is incorrect; it should be 'some people can be too lazy'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× So I think so that's why don't make it.

✓ So I think that's why they don't make lists.

The phrase 'So I think so that's why don't make it' is ungrammatical and unclear. It should be 'So I think that's why they don't make lists' to correctly express the idea with proper subject and verb.

× So I think so that's why don't make it.

✓ So I think that's why they don't make lists.

The original sentence lacks a subject pronoun before 'don't make it'. Adding 'they' clarifies who is being referred to.

× Oh I always make a list on my phone as my phone is always with me and it makes it so easy and convenient to check out on my products that I want to buy in the market and whether instead of the diary.

✓ Oh, I always make a list on my phone as my phone is always with me and it makes it so easy and convenient to check the products that I want to buy in the market and weather instead of the diary.

The phrase 'check out on my products' should be 'check the products'. Also, 'whether' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'weather'. The preposition 'on' after 'check out' is unnecessary here.

× Oh I always make a list on my phone as my phone is always with me and it makes it so easy and convenient to check out on my products that I want to buy in the market and whether instead of the diary.

✓ Oh, I always make a list on my phone as my phone is always with me and it makes it so easy and convenient to check the products that I want to buy in the market and weather instead of the diary.

The preposition 'on' after 'check out' is incorrect in this context; 'check' should be used without 'on'.

× So I don't like paperwork, I most of the time use my phone to make the To Do List.

✓ So I don't like paperwork; most of the time, I use my phone to make the To-Do List.

The phrase 'I most of the time use' is awkward; it should be 'most of the time, I use' for correct adverb placement. Also, 'To Do List' should be hyphenated as 'To-Do List'.