列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more concise and avoid repeating the same idea. Use linking words to connect your points smoothly. For example, you can say, "Yes, I like to write a list because it helps me shop faster and remember exactly what I need, thus reducing wasted time."

範例: Yes, I like to write a list because it helps me shop faster and remember exactly what I need, thus reducing wasted time.

建議: Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Also, avoid grammatical errors and incomplete sentences. For example, say, "I often make mental lists for my work instead of writing them down. This method helps me remember my tasks and complete my work efficiently."

範例: I often make mental lists for my work instead of writing them down. This method helps me remember my tasks and complete my work efficiently.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Try to give a full, clear response with specific reasons. For example, "Some people dislike making lists because it requires effort and time. They prefer to rely on memory or comfort, which might be easier for them."

範例: Some people dislike making lists because it requires effort and time. They prefer to rely on memory or comfort, which might be easier for them.

建議: Try to complete your sentences and use linking words for clarity. For example, "I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me, so I can't forget the list. Also, it reminds me at the right time to complete my tasks."

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me, so I can't forget the list. Also, it reminds me at the right time to complete my tasks.

× Yes, I like to write a list because it helps me to do my shopping faster and helps me to remember what exactly I need and it helps me to reduce wasting time.

✓ Yes, I like to write a list because it helps me do my shopping faster, helps me remember exactly what I need, and helps me reduce wasting time.

The phrase 'helps me to do' and 'helps me to remember' can be simplified to 'helps me do' and 'helps me remember' by using the base form of the verb after 'help'. Also, 'what exactly I need' is better as 'exactly what I need' for natural word order. This improves fluency and correctness.

× I make a list all the time in my mind, not writing in the paper for my job and for my work because it's helped me a lot to do everything I have to do in terms of my job.

✓ I make a list all the time in my mind, not writing on paper for my job and work because it has helped me a lot to do everything I have to do in terms of my job.

The phrase 'it's helped' should be 'it has helped' to correctly use the present perfect tense. Also, 'writing in the paper' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on paper'. These corrections improve grammatical accuracy.

× And it remind me, it reminds me how I can complete all of these work in the.

✓ And it reminds me how I can complete all of this work.

The verb 'remind' must agree with the singular subject 'it', so 'remind' should be 'reminds'. Also, 'all of these work' is incorrect because 'work' is uncountable; it should be 'all of this work'. The sentence was incomplete and is corrected for clarity.

× People don't like writing list because it needs a lot of effort and it takes.

✓ People don't like writing lists because it needs a lot of effort and takes time.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general activity of writing lists. Also, the sentence is incomplete; adding 'takes time' completes the thought. This correction addresses number agreement and sentence completeness.

× Sometimes people prefer to rely on comfort and do their job. So 90% of people do it like this but the.

✓ Sometimes people prefer to rely on comfort and do their job that way. So 90% of people do it like this, but not everyone.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'that way' clarifies the manner of doing the job. Completing the sentence with 'but not everyone' makes it grammatically correct and meaningful.

× I prefer to do it in my phone.

✓ I prefer to do it on my phone.

The correct preposition to use with 'phone' in this context is 'on', not 'in'. We say 'on my phone' when referring to using the device.

× The reason for that is that my phone holds with me so there is not no chance to forget it.

✓ The reason for that is that my phone is with me, so there is no chance to forget it.

The phrase 'my phone holds with me' is incorrect; it should be 'my phone is with me'. Also, 'not no' is a double negative and should be 'no'. These corrections fix sentence structure and clarity.

× So it's always with me and it can also gives me a peep for my list so I can do it in the right timing so that the phone is.

✓ So it's always with me and it can also give me a beep for my list so I can do it at the right time.

The verb 'gives' should be 'give' to agree with 'it' after 'can'. The word 'peep' is incorrect; the correct word is 'beep'. 'In the right timing' should be 'at the right time'. The sentence was incomplete and is corrected for clarity and grammar.