列表— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you make a list when you shop?
考生
Yes, I make a list when I need to shop because I like planning things and uh, I do not want to improvise myself whenever the time comes, but you know, uh, there's always time that uh, you need something that is out of the list, but, umm.
考官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
考生
Unfortunately, no, I do not make a lease for my work because, uh, uh, because my work, it has to be, uh, I mean, sorry, I need to do that again, umm, because my work requires an improvisation, so no.
考官
Why don't some people like making lists?
考生
Will I assume that some people don't like to use their brain or when making a list? So you know, you don't know what's going to happen in the future. But let's say if you're making a list, you have to guess what's going to happen. You have to anticipate what's going to happen. And that made me some.
考官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
考生
I prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on a paper because I usually carry my phone. And if you want to bring your paper, which is which you, uh, which you made a list on, umm, that's, that's not good because you have to bring your pen or pencil.
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
分數: 65.0建議: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고, 중복되는 표현과 불필요한 망설임이 많습니다. 문장을 간결하게 하고, 명확한 이유와 구체적인 예시를 포함하여 답변을 구성하는 연습이 필요합니다.
範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me stay organized and avoid forgetting important items. For example, last week I bought everything I needed without any last-minute trips to the store.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
分數: 50.0建議: 답변이 불명확하고 반복적인 망설임이 많아 의사 전달이 어렵습니다. 간결하고 명확한 문장으로 직접 질문에 답하고, 이유를 구체적으로 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.
範例: No, I don't usually make a list for my work because my tasks often change unexpectedly, so I need to be flexible and adapt quickly.
Why don't some people like making lists?
分數: 55.0建議: 답변이 혼란스럽고 논리적 연결이 부족합니다. 질문에 직접 답하고, 이유를 명확하게 설명하며, 연결어를 사용해 답변을 체계적으로 구성하는 연습이 필요합니다.
範例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it difficult to predict what will happen in the future. Therefore, they prefer to stay flexible rather than plan ahead.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
分數: 70.0建議: 답변이 비교적 명확하지만, 반복되는 표현과 망설임이 있습니다. 간결하고 자연스러운 문장으로 이유를 구체적으로 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.
範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always have it with me, and it's more convenient than carrying paper and a pen.
文法
× I do not want to improvise myself whenever the time comes
✓ I do not want to improvise whenever the time comes
The reflexive pronoun 'myself' is incorrectly used here. 'Improvise' is a verb that does not require a reflexive pronoun in this context. Removing 'myself' makes the sentence grammatically correct.
× because my work, it has to be, uh, I mean, sorry, I need to do that again, umm, because my work requires an improvisation, so no.
✓ because my work requires improvisation, so no.
The phrase 'my work, it has to be' is redundant and incorrect. Also, 'an improvisation' is incorrect here; 'improvisation' is an uncountable noun and should not have an article. Simplifying the sentence improves clarity and correctness.
× Will I assume that some people don't like to use their brain or when making a list?
✓ I assume that some people don't like to use their brain when making a list.
The modal verb 'Will' is incorrectly used at the beginning of the sentence, making it a question when the intended meaning is a statement. Removing 'Will' corrects the sentence structure.
× And that made me some.
✓ And that made me think so.
The phrase 'made me some' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is likely 'made me think so' or 'made me feel that way.' Correcting it clarifies the sentence.
× I prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on a paper because I usually carry my phone.
✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on paper because I usually carry my phone.
The article 'a' before 'paper' is incorrect because 'paper' in this context is uncountable. Removing 'a' makes the sentence grammatically correct.
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