列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is relevant but can be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure. For example, instead of repeating 'whenever I go for shopping', say it once clearly. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, definitely. I usually make a list when I go shopping with my family because I tend to forget things easily. Therefore, making a list helps me remember what to buy.

建議: Your answer needs clearer structure and more natural phrasing. Avoid awkward expressions like 'there is no denying for that' and 'clear my goal as soon as'. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

範例: Yes, I always make a list when I have work to do because it helps me remember my tasks clearly. Since I often forget things, the list keeps me organised and focused.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. 'Personal prospects' and 'good in urban' are confusing phrases. Try to express your opinion clearly with relevant reasons and examples, using simple and correct vocabulary.

範例: I think some people don't like making lists because they prefer to rely on their memory. They might be confident in managing tasks without writing them down.

建議: Your answer has some pronunciation and word choice errors ('lift' instead of 'list', 'solve' instead of 'check'). Also, avoid repetition and improve sentence flow with linking words. Use clear and correct vocabulary.

範例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is very convenient. I can check it anytime, and it never gets lost like paper lists do.

× I am not good in learning.

✓ I am not good at learning.

The correct preposition to use with 'good' in this context is 'at', not 'in'. So, it should be 'good at learning'. This is a common prepositional usage in English.

× So that is the one of the reason I make list whenever I go for shopping.

✓ So that is one of the reasons I make a list whenever I go shopping.

The phrase 'one of the reason' is incorrect because 'reason' should be plural as 'reasons' when preceded by 'one of the'. Also, 'make list' should be 'make a list'. Additionally, 'go for shopping' is better expressed as 'go shopping'.

× I usually make a list whenever I need to do a work so that I can remember it well what I need to do or clear my goal as soon as.

✓ I usually make a list whenever I need to do work so that I can remember well what I need to do or clear my goal as soon as possible.

The phrase 'do a work' is incorrect; 'work' is uncountable here and should not have an article 'a'. Also, 'remember it well what I need to do' is awkward; better to say 'remember well what I need to do'. 'As soon as' is incomplete and should be 'as soon as possible'.

× Because I am not good in remembering things, I usually forget whenever I had to do any work.

✓ Because I am not good at remembering things, I usually forget whenever I have to do any work.

The phrase 'not good in remembering' should be 'not good at remembering'. Also, 'whenever I had to do any work' is incorrect tense; it should be present tense 'whenever I have to do any work' to match the habitual action.

× Well, it totally depends on their personal prospects.

✓ Well, it totally depends on their personal preferences.

The word 'prospects' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'preferences' to indicate personal choices or likes.

× They have vast number of learning skills so that is the reason they don't make list whenever they have to perform any task.

✓ They have a vast number of learning skills, so that is the reason they don't make a list whenever they have to perform any task.

The phrase 'vast number' requires an article 'a' before it. Also, 'make list' should be 'make a list'.

× Well, I prefer to make a lift on my phone.

✓ Well, I prefer to make a list on my phone.

The word 'lift' is a typo or incorrect word; it should be 'list'.

× I can usually solve whenever, whenever I want.

✓ I can usually check it whenever I want.

The word 'solve' is incorrect in this context; the intended meaning is likely 'check' or 'access'. Also, the repetition of 'whenever' is unnecessary.

× Apart from this it never lost because the paper lift always lost and I don't remember well where I kept it.

✓ Apart from this, it is never lost because the paper list always gets lost and I don't remember well where I kept it.

The phrase 'it never lost' is incorrect; it should be 'it is never lost'. Also, 'paper lift' should be 'paper list'. The verb 'lost' needs auxiliary 'gets' to form 'gets lost'.

× So that is the reason I make phone list.

✓ So that is the reason I make a phone list.

The phrase 'make phone list' is missing the article 'a' before 'phone list'.