列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中语法和表达不够自然，句子结构混乱，建议简化句子，避免重复，使用更准确的表达。

範例: I usually make a shopping list when I need to buy specific items to avoid forgetting anything. However, if I just go to the store casually, I don't make a list.

建議: 表达不够清晰，语法错误较多，逻辑不连贯。建议使用简单句表达观点，并说明原因。

範例: I sometimes make lists for my work, but not often because I find it boring and time-consuming. I feel that making lists doesn't help me perform better.

建議: 回答内容重复且表达不清晰，建议明确表达观点，使用连贯的句子，并给出具体原因。

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to work in their own way. They find lists boring and think they waste time.

建議: 回答较为自然，但有口头语和重复，建议减少填充词，句子更简洁流畅。

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient and flexible. For example, I can easily add or delete items whenever my plans change.

× Well it depends if I have something needed I have to buy something and when.

✓ Well, it depends if I need something, I have to buy it and when.

这里的 'needed' 是过去分词，应该用动词原形或现在时态表达需求，改为 'need' 更符合语法。

× But if I just generally to take a walk on the shop I I won't make any list.

✓ But if I just generally take a walk in the shop, I won't make any list.

'to take' 不符合句子结构，应使用动词原形 'take'。另外，介词 'on' 应改为 'in'，表示在商店里。

× Oh well, I do make a list for my work, but I'm not usually make a list.

✓ Oh well, I do make a list for my work, but I don't usually make a list.

'I'm not usually make' 语法错误，应该用否定助动词 'don't' 加动词原形 'make'。

× I think make a list is kind of boring and time consuming.

✓ I think making a list is kind of boring and time consuming.

动词 'make' 作为主语时应使用动名词形式 'making'。

× So I 'cause I don't like making this so I'm not sure it is work for me.

✓ So, because I don't like making this, I'm not sure it works for me.

'it is work' 应改为 'it works'，动词需用第三人称单数形式。

× Oh well, in my opinions people like me who don't like make this 'cause they have their own place of doing somethings they don't like let the list to retrieve their performance.

✓ Oh well, in my opinion, people like me who don't like making this because they have their own way of doing things and don't like letting the list affect their performance.

'don't like make' 应改为 'don't like making'，动词后接动名词。'place' 应为 'way' 更合适。'somethings' 应为复数 'things'。'let the list to retrieve' 结构错误，应改为 'letting the list affect'。

× So for them making this is kind of boring and time consuming.

✓ So for them, making this is kind of boring and time consuming.

此句无语法错误，仅加逗号使句子更通顺。

× Oh well, I prefer to make this on my phone 'cause you know, umm, using phone to umm make this definitely more convenient and flexible.

✓ Oh well, I prefer to make this on my phone because, you know, using a phone to make this is definitely more convenient and flexible.

'using phone' 应加冠词 'a'，且句子中缺少动词 'is'。

× For example, when whenever you need to change your schedule, you can easily use your phone to delete the umm items you don't want and added something.

✓ For example, whenever you need to change your schedule, you can easily use your phone to delete the items you don't want and add something.

'added' 应用动词原形 'add'，因为前面有助动词 'can'，后面动词应为原形。