列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答が少し冗長で繰り返しが見られます。より自然で効果的な表現にするために、簡潔に答え、具体的な理由や例を明確に述べる練習をしましょう。例えば、"I make a shopping list because it helps me save time and stay organized. For instance, I know exactly which shops to visit and what to buy."のように表現すると良いです。

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me save time and avoid forgetting items. For example, I plan my route in advance to visit the shops efficiently.

× Yes, I make the list when I shop when I do shopping because by making the by making the list I can use the shopping time more efficiently.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I shop because by making the list I can use my shopping time more efficiently.

The phrase 'when I do shopping' is incorrect; 'shopping' as a noun does not require 'do'. Instead, 'when I shop' is correct. Also, 'the list' should be 'a list' as it is not previously specified. Repetition 'by making the by making the list' is redundant and should be corrected.

× Yes, I make the list when I shop when I do shopping because by making the by making the list I can use the shopping time more efficiently.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I shop because by making the list I can use my shopping time more efficiently.

Use of 'the list' is incorrect here because the list is not previously mentioned; 'a list' is appropriate for introducing something new. Also, 'the shopping time' should be 'my shopping time' to indicate possession.

× For example, if the shop I will go is already decided, I can go there and if there is no empty time, I can use that time.

✓ For example, if the shop I will go to is already decided, I can go there, and if I have free time, I can use it.

The phrase 'the shop I will go' is missing the preposition 'to'. 'If there is no empty time' is awkward; 'if I have free time' is clearer. Also, the sentence needs proper conjunction and punctuation for clarity.

× Yes, I make the list for my study, especially before the test, I have a lot of things to do, so I usually make the list.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my study, especially before a test, because I have a lot of things to do, so I usually make a list.

'The list' should be 'a list' as it is not previously specified. 'Before the test' should be 'before a test' unless referring to a specific test. Repetition of 'make the list' is corrected to 'make a list'.

× But but by doing so, I can organize the task clearly.

✓ But by doing so, I can organize the tasks clearly.

Repeated 'but' is a typographical error. Also, 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match 'a lot of things to do' context.

× In my opinion, some people are avoid to make the list because if that things to do is already decided they are they are no free time to do other things, so I so they therefore.

✓ In my opinion, some people avoid making lists because if their things to do are already decided, they have no free time to do other things.

'Are avoid to make' is incorrect; correct form is 'avoid making'. 'That things' should be 'their things' to indicate possession. 'Is' should be 'are' to agree with plural 'things'. Repetition and incomplete phrases are removed for clarity.

× I prefer to make the list on paper.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper.

'The list' should be 'a list' because it is not a specific list previously mentioned.

× This is because if I make the list on paper that is more I can memorize the things to do on my brain more.

✓ This is because if I make a list on paper, I can memorize the things I need to do better.

'The list' should be 'a list'. 'That is more' is unclear and unnecessary. 'Memorize the things to do on my brain more' is awkward; 'memorize the things I need to do better' is clearer.

× Because if I make the list on my phone, maybe I miss to do miss to.

✓ Because if I make a list on my phone, maybe I forget to do some tasks.

'Miss to do' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'forget to do'. Also, 'the list' should be 'a list'.