列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear but a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to be more concise and use linking words to improve flow. Also, avoid redundancy like "go to shopping"; instead say "go shopping."

範例: No, I usually don't make a list when I go shopping because I live alone in the city. If I need something, I just visit local vendors and buy what I need.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but could be clearer and more structured. Use linking words like 'because' to connect ideas and avoid repeating phrases like 'currently' and 'at the moment.'

範例: No, I don't make lists for work because I am currently a student. I have tried making routines before, but I often fail to follow them, so I stopped making plans.

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to use more precise vocabulary and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, use linking words like 'because' and 'so' properly.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they often fail to follow them, or they feel too lazy to stick to the plan, so they prefer not to make lists at all.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical mistakes. Try to complete your thoughts clearly and use correct sentence structures. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas and use linking words to connect your points.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's easier to organize them. The phone automatically records the time and date, which helps me keep track of my tasks efficiently.

× No, in fact I don't create any list whenever I go to shopping because I live in city area and I live all alone in a single room.

✓ No, in fact I don't create any list whenever I go shopping because I live in the city area and I live all alone in a single room.

The phrase 'go to shopping' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go shopping' without 'to'. Also, 'in city area' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'city area'.

× No, in fact I don't create any list whenever I go to shopping because I live in city area and I live all alone in a single room.

✓ No, in fact I don't create any lists whenever I go shopping because I live in the city area and I live all alone in a single room.

The word 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to any list in general, which is countable and plural in this context.

× If I need anything, I just visit the local vendors and buy the products that I need.

✓ If I need anything, I just visit local vendors and buy the products that I need.

The definite article 'the' before 'local vendors' is unnecessary here because it refers to vendors in general, not specific ones.

× Currently I don't work at the moment, I'm just focused on my studies and whenever I tried making routines and plans I ended up not following them, so I don't make them anymore.

✓ Currently I don't work at the moment, I'm just focused on my studies and whenever I try making routines and plans I end up not following them, so I don't make them anymore.

The verb 'tried' is past tense, but the sentence context requires present tense 'try' to match 'whenever' indicating repeated action in present time. Similarly, 'ended' should be 'end'.

× Some people are reluctant to make lists because whenever the people make list, either they end up not following the list or people are just extremely lazy to follow the list so they just choose to not make the list anymore.

✓ Some people are reluctant to make lists because whenever people make a list, either they end up not following the list or people are just extremely lazy to follow the list so they just choose not to make the list anymore.

The phrase 'make list' should be 'make a list' because 'list' is countable and singular here. Also, 'choose to not make' is better as 'choose not to make' for natural word order.

× Some people are reluctant to make lists because whenever the people make list, either they end up not following the list or people are just extremely lazy to follow the list so they just choose to not make the list anymore.

✓ Some people are reluctant to make lists because whenever people make a list, either they end up not following it or are just extremely lazy to follow it so they just choose not to make the list anymore.

Using 'people' repeatedly is redundant; pronouns like 'they' and 'it' should be used to avoid repetition and improve sentence flow.

× I prefer to create list on the phone because it is very easier in the phone.

✓ I prefer to create lists on the phone because it is much easier on the phone.

The phrase 'create list' should be 'create lists' (plural). Also, 'in the phone' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on the phone'. 'Very easier' is incorrect; 'much easier' is the correct comparative form.

× I prefer to create list on the phone because it is very easier in the phone.

✓ I prefer to create lists on the phone because it is much easier on the phone.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general action of creating multiple lists.

× However I like I can easily organize that it records the time, date, everything all by itself.

✓ However, I like that I can easily organize it and that it records the time, date, everything all by itself.

The original sentence has incorrect conjunction and structure. Adding 'that' and connecting clauses properly improves clarity and grammatical correctness.