列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Perbaiki struktur kalimat agar lebih alami dan efektif. Misalnya, gunakan 'I sometimes write a list of items I want to buy when I go to the supermarket' untuk menghindari kesalahan tata bahasa dan membuat jawaban lebih jelas.

範例: Yes, I sometimes write a list of items I want to buy when I go to the supermarket to make sure I don't forget anything.

建議: Gunakan tense yang konsisten dan perbaiki kalimat agar lebih natural. Misalnya, gunakan present tense 'helps' karena ini kebiasaan. Tambahkan kata penghubung untuk kelancaran.

範例: Yes, I usually make a weekly tutor list for my tests because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything important.

建議: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan struktur kalimat agar lebih jelas dan alami. Gunakan linking words untuk menghubungkan ide. Contohnya, 'I think some people don't like making lists because remembering tasks can feel stressful, and they want to avoid that pressure.'

範例: I think some people don't like making lists because remembering tasks can feel stressful, and they want to avoid that pressure.

建議: Jawaban sudah cukup baik, tapi bisa lebih ringkas dan menggunakan linking words yang lebih tepat seperti 'Moreover' atau 'In addition'.

範例: I prefer to make a list on paper because it's satisfying to cross off completed tasks. Moreover, I keep a digital copy on my phone as a convenient reminder so I can check my list anytime.

× Yes, sometimes I write down a list what I want to buy when I go to the supermarket.

✓ Yes, sometimes I write down a list of what I want to buy when I go to the supermarket.

The phrase 'a list what I want to buy' is incorrect because 'list' should be followed by 'of' when specifying the items. The correct phrase is 'a list of what I want to buy'. This is a common prepositional usage error.

× Yes, I usually make a weekly tutor list for my test because it helped me to stay organized and I'm sure that I don't forget anything important.

✓ Yes, I usually make a weekly tutor list for my test because it helps me to stay organized and I'm sure that I don't forget anything important.

The sentence mixes present tense 'usually make' with past tense 'helped'. Since the action is habitual, 'helped' should be in present tense 'helps' to maintain tense consistency.

× I think because when we remembering the task, it feels pressure and many people avoid the feeling that the fact facing the fact that we have so much task.

✓ I think because when we remember the tasks, it feels like pressure and many people avoid the feeling of facing the fact that we have so many tasks.

The verb 'remembering' should be 'remember' to match the present tense. 'Feels pressure' should be 'feels like pressure' to be idiomatic. 'So much task' should be 'so many tasks' because 'tasks' is countable and plural. Also, 'the feeling that the fact facing the fact' is redundant and corrected to 'the feeling of facing the fact'.

× I think because when we remembering the task, it feels pressure and many people avoid the feeling that the fact facing the fact that we have so much task.

✓ I think because when we remember the tasks, it feels like pressure and many people avoid the feeling of facing the fact that we have so many tasks.

The word 'task' is countable and should be plural 'tasks' when referring to multiple items. Also, 'so much' is used for uncountable nouns; for countable plural nouns, 'so many' is correct.

× I prefer to make a list on paper because it feels very satisfying to take off the task that I have completed.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because it feels very satisfying to tick off the tasks that I have completed.

The phrase 'take off the task' is incorrect. The correct idiomatic expression is 'tick off the tasks' or 'cross off the tasks' when marking completed items on a list. Also, 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the context.