列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但语法错误较多，且句子结构不够自然。建议注意动词时态和单复数的正确使用，同时避免重复表达。可以尝试用更简洁的句子表达观点。

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because I often forget what I need to buy. However, recently I have not always followed the list strictly, but I plan to do so in the future.

建議: 回答中表达不够清晰，最后一句话不完整且含糊。建议在回答时确保句子完整，表达明确，避免含糊其辞。同时可以增加具体例子说明为什么列表有时不起作用。

範例: Yes, I always make a to-do list before work because it helps me organize my tasks. However, sometimes it doesn't work well because I struggle with time management and can't complete everything on the list.

建議: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议使用更自然的表达方式，避免重复，并且用连接词使句子更连贯。

範例: I think some people prefer to be spontaneous rather than making plans. Also, some may create lists but fail to follow them consistently.

建議: 回答中时态使用不当，句子结构不够清晰。建议注意时态一致性，简化句子结构，并使用恰当的介词和冠词。

範例: It depends on the situation. When I was studying, I liked to make lists on paper. But when I go out, like shopping or traveling, I usually make lists on my phone.

× Well, I usually do a list when I shopping because I always forget this thing that I want to buy.

✓ Well, I usually make a list when I am shopping because I always forget the things that I want to buy.

动词后面接动名词时，shopping 应该用现在进行时态 am shopping，且动词短语应为 make a list 而不是 do a list。

× However, nowadays I usually do a list but I didn't follow the list when I shopping.

✓ However, nowadays I usually make a list but I don't follow the list when I am shopping.

句中时态不一致，nowadays 表示现在时，不能用过去时 didn't，且 shopping 应用现在进行时态。

× However, nowadays I usually do a list but I didn't follow the list when I shopping.

✓ However, nowadays I usually make a list but I don't follow the list when I am shopping.

shopping 应该用现在进行时态 am shopping，表示正在进行的动作。

× I will.

✓ I will.

此句无语法错误，保持原句。

× Well, I always make a list before working because I think it is very useful.

✓ Well, I always make a list before working because I think it is very useful.

此句无语法错误，保持原句。

× I can know what I will do from it.

✓ I can know what I will do from it.

此句无语法错误，保持原句。

× However, it doesn't always work because I think I don't have enough ability about 10 management and.

✓ However, it doesn't always work because I think I don't have enough ability in time management and so on.

短语中介词用错，应该用 in time management 表示“在时间管理方面”，且句尾不完整，补充 so on 表示等等。

× Maybe the people will think freestyle is freestyle is better than make a plan, or maybe they make a plan but they don't follow it anymore.

✓ Maybe people think freestyle is better than making a plan, or maybe they make a plan but don't follow it anymore.

重复使用 freestyle is 错误，且比较结构中动词应用动名词 making，去掉多余的代词 the。

× Well I think it depends on situation.

✓ Well, I think it depends on the situation.

depends 后面应接介词 on the situation，缺少定冠词 the。

× When I was studying I like to make the list in the paper on the paper and when I was go out such as do some shopping or have a travel, I maybe make the list on the phone.

✓ When I was studying, I liked to make the list on paper, and when I go out, such as to do some shopping or travel, I maybe make the list on the phone.

时态不一致，was studying 是过去时，后面 like 应改为 liked；go out 应用一般现在时；介词用法错误，on the paper 应为 on paper；have a travel 应为 travel 或 go on a trip。