Part 1
考官
Do you make a list when you shop?
考生
Yeah, definitely. I think making a list can help me to plan what to buy and by how much. So making a list can. Remind me?
考官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
考生
Yes, I always do this. Making a list can conclude all works I need to do and make a schedule for for myself. And it really works because umm, it reminds me of the deadline of everything.
考官
Why don't some people like making lists?
考生
Umm, I'm not sure. Maybe they're not accustomed to the life being restricted. Maybe they want to have more flexible hours in works so they don't want to. Plan the things before they start.
考官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
考生
Maybe it depends. When I don't have a paper or pen besides me, I think is very useful and convenient because I can get my anywhere. However, I think doing something on paper can help me.
Do you make a list when you shop?
分數: 65.0建議: 回答不够连贯,存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题。建议注意句子结构,避免断句,确保表达完整且自然。
範例: Yes, I definitely make a list when I shop because it helps me plan what to buy and how much I need. This way, I can avoid forgetting important items and manage my budget better.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
分數: 70.0建議: 回答中有语法错误,如“conclude all works”表达不准确,且有重复词汇。建议使用更准确的词汇和简洁表达。
範例: Yes, I always make a list for my work. It helps me organize all the tasks I need to complete and create a schedule. It works well because it reminds me of all the deadlines.
Why don't some people like making lists?
分數: 60.0建議: 回答表达不够自然,存在语法和用词错误,如“in works”应为“at work”,且句子不够流畅。建议多练习自然表达和正确用词。
範例: I'm not sure, but maybe some people dislike making lists because they prefer a more flexible lifestyle and don't want to plan everything in advance.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
分數: 55.0建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整,如“I think is very useful”缺少主语,且句子不够连贯。建议注意句子完整性和逻辑连接。
範例: It depends. When I don't have paper or a pen, I find it very useful and convenient to make a list on my phone because I can access it anywhere. However, sometimes writing on paper helps me remember better.
× I think making a list can help me to plan what to buy and by how much.
✓ I think making a list can help me to plan what to buy and by how much.
此句中“by how much”应为“how much to buy”,因为“by”用法不当,属于介词使用错误。
× So making a list can. Remind me?
✓ So making a list can remind me.
句子中断句错误,且“Remind”首字母不应大写,且句子应完整。
× Making a list can conclude all works I need to do and make a schedule for for myself.
✓ Making a list can include all the work I need to do and make a schedule for myself.
“conclude”用法错误,应为“include”;“works”应为不可数名词“work”;“for for”重复。
× Maybe they want to have more flexible hours in works so they don't want to.
✓ Maybe they want to have more flexible hours at work so they don't want to.
“works”应为不可数名词“work”,表示工作。
× When I don't have a paper or pen besides me, I think is very useful and convenient because I can get my anywhere.
✓ When I don't have a paper or pen with me, I think my phone is very useful and convenient because I can get it anywhere.
“besides me”用法错误,应为“with me”;缺少主语“my phone”;“get my anywhere”表达不清,应为“get it anywhere”。