列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by using more natural expressions and avoiding redundancy. For example, instead of 'what I want to pay', you could say 'what I want to buy'. Also, try to keep your answer concise and avoid repeating similar ideas.

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need to buy and prevents me from purchasing unnecessary items.

建議: Your answer needs clearer structure and more natural phrasing. Try to start with a direct response, then add specific details using linking words. Avoid awkward phrases like 'things what I mostly or very needed'. Instead, say 'the most important tasks I need to complete each day'.

範例: Yes, I always make a list of my work tasks because it helps me remember the most important things I need to do each day. For example, I list my subjects and topics to ensure I cover everything on time.

建議: Your answer has good ideas but needs clearer expression and grammar correction. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, say 'Some people dislike making lists because they find the process time-consuming and restrictive. They prefer to keep their day flexible rather than structured. Additionally, some individuals might feel overwhelmed by too many tasks.'

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming and restrictive. Moreover, they prefer to keep their day flexible instead of following a strict schedule. Also, some individuals may feel overwhelmed when they see too many tasks written down.

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant but can be improved by using more varied vocabulary and linking words for coherence. For example, use 'since' or 'because' to connect ideas smoothly and replace 'helps me remember the list better' with 'makes it easier to keep track of my tasks'.

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is always with me, so I can access it anytime. Since I don't have to worry about losing a paper list or carrying it around, it makes it easier to keep track of my tasks.

× Yes, of course I make a list when I purchase.

✓ Yes, of course I make a list when I am purchasing.

The verb 'purchase' in this context should be in the present continuous form 'am purchasing' to indicate the ongoing action of shopping. Using the base form 'purchase' is incorrect here as it does not fit the sentence structure.

× It helps me to remember what I want to pay and not to buy useless or unneeded things.

✓ It helps me to remember what I want to buy and not to buy useless or unneeded things.

The verb 'pay' is incorrectly used here; the correct verb should be 'buy' because the context is about shopping and remembering items to purchase, not about payment.

× It helps me to remember the things what I mostly or very needed I have to do in a day.

✓ It helps me to remember the things that I mostly or very much need to do in a day.

The relative pronoun 'what' is incorrect here; it should be 'that' to introduce the relative clause. Also, 'needed' should be in present tense 'need' to match the present context, and 'very' should be followed by 'much' to modify 'need' properly.

× And also I make a list of my subjects, topics and something which I have to do it today or not.

✓ And also I make a list of my subjects, topics, and things which I have to do today or not.

The phrase 'something which I have to do it' is incorrect because 'which' and 'it' are redundant together. Also, 'something' is vague; 'things' fits better in this context. The sentence is corrected by removing 'it' and replacing 'something' with 'things'.

× They love to be their task or the day flexible and not to be rather than structured.

✓ They love their tasks or the day to be flexible rather than structured.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and conjunction use. 'Love to be their task or the day flexible' is incorrect; it should be 'love their tasks or the day to be flexible'. Also, 'not to be rather than structured' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'rather than structured' without 'not to be'.

× Additionally, some individual might have finalist overwhelming.

✓ Additionally, some individuals might feel finally overwhelmed.

'Some individual' should be plural 'some individuals'. 'Finalist overwhelming' is incorrect; likely intended was 'finally overwhelmed' or 'feel overwhelmed'. The correction uses 'might feel finally overwhelmed' to make grammatical sense.