列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법적 오류가 있습니다. 'shoplist'와 'shoplifts' 같은 단어 사용이 부적절하며, 문장이 명확하지 않습니다. 간결하고 명확한 문장으로 직접 질문에 답하고, 필요하면 구체적인 이유를 덧붙이세요.

範例: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I only buy a few items and I remember them easily.

建議: 답변이 매우 불명확하고 문법적으로도 문제가 많습니다. 질문에 직접적으로 답하고, 리스트를 만드는 이유와 효과에 대해 구체적으로 설명하세요. 문장을 완성하고 연결어를 사용해 논리적으로 만드세요.

範例: Sometimes I make a list for my work, and it helps me stay organized, but I don't do it regularly.

建議: 문장이 어색하고 중복된 단어가 있습니다. 질문에 직접 답하고, 왜 리스트 만들기가 어려운지 구체적인 이유를 명확하게 설명하세요. 연결어를 사용해 문장을 자연스럽게 만드세요.

範例: Some people, including me, don't like making lists because it feels restrictive and difficult to follow.

建議: 답변이 비교적 명확하지만, 문장 구조가 다소 어색하고 반복이 있습니다. 'making a phone' 같은 표현은 부적절합니다. 간결하고 자연스러운 문장으로 비교를 명확히 하세요.

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is more convenient and always with me, unlike paper lists.

× Actually no, because I I usually buy some shoplist from my head and my shoplifts are a few things.

✓ Actually no, because I usually buy some shopping list from my head and my shopping list has a few things.

The word 'shoplist' is incorrect; the correct term is 'shopping list'. Also, 'shoplifts' is a wrong word here; it should be 'shopping list'. The singular and plural forms need to be consistent. 'A few things' refers to plural, so 'shopping list' should be singular to match the context.

× Umm, I make a raise for my work and. Is sometimes work, not usual, not always, because I usually plan my list just.

✓ Umm, I make a list for my work and it sometimes works, but not usually, because I usually just plan my list.

The original sentence has incomplete and unclear structure. 'Make a raise' is incorrect; it should be 'make a list'. The phrase 'Is sometimes work' lacks a subject and verb agreement; it should be 'it sometimes works'. The sentence needs reordering for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I also I'm I'm same with some people because that is difficult and sometimes I feel strict feeling.

✓ I am also the same as some people because it is difficult and sometimes I feel strict.

The phrase 'I'm same with some people' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'I am the same as some people'. 'That is difficult' should be 'it is difficult' to refer to the activity. 'Feel strict feeling' is awkward; 'feel strict' or better 'feel pressured' would be more natural.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because making a phone is easier than a list on paper, because phone is useful and convenient, always beside me.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because using my phone is easier than making a list on paper, and the phone is useful and convenient, always beside me.

The phrase 'making a phone' is incorrect; it should be 'using my phone'. Also, 'phone is useful' needs the definite article 'the' before 'phone'. The preposition 'beside me' is correct here.