列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear but can be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like "I would probably" and "so that I won't forget about it". Use linking words to improve flow. For example, you can say, "I usually don't make a list when I shop, but if I have many items to buy, I write them down to remember everything."

範例: I usually don't make a list when I shop, but if I have many items to buy, I write them down to remember everything.

建議: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting grammar and using linking words for coherence. For example, say "I often make a to-do list for my work because it helps me stay organized and manage my time effectively. For instance, by writing down my tasks, I can easily track what I have completed and identify areas for improvement. Therefore, making lists makes my work life more efficient."

範例: I often make a to-do list for my work because it helps me stay organized and manage my time effectively. For instance, by writing down my tasks, I can easily track what I have completed and identify areas for improvement. Therefore, making lists makes my work life more efficient.

建議: Your answer needs clearer structure and grammar correction. Avoid filler words like "So maybe" and be more specific. Use linking words to connect ideas. For example, "Some people may not like making lists because they are confident in their memory. Moreover, experts in certain fields might not need to write things down as they can remember important details easily."

範例: Some people may not like making lists because they are confident in their memory. Moreover, experts in certain fields might not need to write things down as they can remember important details easily.

建議: Your answer has good ideas but needs grammar correction and clearer linking. Avoid unclear phrases like "always scary it around". For example, "It depends on the situation. As an architect, I prefer to make lists on paper at the site because it's easier to write quickly and make sketches. However, if I don't have paper, I use my phone since it's convenient and always with me, helping me keep track."

範例: It depends on the situation. As an architect, I prefer to make lists on paper at the site because it's easier to write quickly and make sketches. However, if I don't have paper, I use my phone since it's convenient and always with me, helping me keep track.

× I generally don't, but if there is a long list then I would probably write it on my notes so that I won't forget about it.

✓ I generally don't, but if there is a long list, then I would probably write it in my notes so that I won't forget it.

The phrase 'write it on my notes' is incorrect because we usually say 'write in my notes' when referring to writing inside a notebook or notes. Also, 'forget about it' can be simplified to 'forget it' for clarity and correctness.

× Yes, I often make A to do list for my work because it helps me stay organized and manage my time effectively.

✓ Yes, I often make a to-do list for my work because it helps me stay organized and manage my time effectively.

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' and 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list' because it is a compound adjective describing the list.

× For example, by writing down my task, I can easily track what I have completed and identify any errors or areas where I need to improve.

✓ For example, by writing down my tasks, I can easily track what I have completed and identify any errors or areas where I need to improve.

The word 'task' should be plural 'tasks' because it refers to multiple items to track, not just one.

× Overall, making list makes my work life much more efficient.

✓ Overall, making lists makes my work life much more efficient.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' because the general statement refers to making lists in general, not just one list.

× Also people in the in their expertise, they don't need to write down the stuffs they want to remember.

✓ Also, people in their expertise don't need to write down the stuff they want to remember.

The phrase 'in the in their expertise' is incorrect and redundant; it should be 'in their expertise'. Also, 'stuffs' is incorrect; the correct uncountable noun is 'stuff'.

× Actually it depends on the situation.

✓ Actually, it depends on the situation.

A comma is needed after 'Actually' to separate the introductory word from the main clause.

× Since I'm an architect, when I'm on this site, I prefer to make a list on paper because it's easier to note down quickly and sketches.

✓ Since I'm an architect, when I'm on site, I prefer to make a list on paper because it's easier to note things down quickly and make sketches.

The phrase 'on this site' should be 'on site' to mean the work location. Also, 'note down quickly and sketches' is incomplete; it should be 'note things down quickly and make sketches' for clarity and correctness.

× However, if I don't have paper with me, I usually use my phone to make a list because it's convenient and always scary it around so it will help me to keep.

✓ However, if I don't have paper with me, I usually use my phone to make a list because it's convenient and I always carry it around, so it helps me keep track.

The phrase 'always scary it around' is incorrect; it should be 'always carry it around'. Also, 'help me to keep' is incomplete; it should be 'helps me keep track' to clarify the meaning.