列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có vẻ tự nhiên nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp từ không cần thiết. Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng thì đúng (make a list when I shop) và tránh lặp lại từ ngữ (I find it really I find it). Hơn nữa, câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn và rõ ràng hơn.

範例: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything important.

建議: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Tránh lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc. Ví dụ, thay vì nói "it's not work to me", bạn có thể nói "it doesn't always work for me".

範例: I usually make a list for my work, but it doesn't always work because there are many distractions in modern life that prevent me from following it strictly.

建議: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu. Tránh lặp từ và sử dụng thì đúng. Bạn cũng nên dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: I think some people find making lists time-consuming, so they prefer to start working on their tasks immediately without planning.

建議: Câu trả lời khá tự nhiên nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ như "phone nowadays have" nên là "phone nowadays has". Bạn cũng nên tránh dùng từ ngữ không chính thức như "you know" và "yeah" trong bài thi IELTS.

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it has many useful features that remind me about my tasks.

× Yeah, I usually make a list when I shopping because I find it really I find it much easier for me to shopping and yeah.

✓ Yeah, I usually make a list when I am shopping because I find it really, I find it much easier for me to shop and yeah.

The verb 'shopping' needs to be in the present participle form after 'I am' to indicate the continuous action. Also, 'to shopping' is incorrect; after 'to' the base form 'shop' should be used. The sentence requires 'I am shopping' and 'to shop' for correct grammar.

× Yet I usually make a list for my works, but I think that is not usually works because umm, you know, there's there are too much distraction in in the modern life.

✓ Yet I usually make a list for my work, but I think that it does not usually work because, umm, you know, there are too many distractions in modern life.

The word 'works' is incorrect here; 'work' as an uncountable noun is appropriate. 'Too much distraction' should be 'too many distractions' because 'distractions' is countable plural. Also, 'there's there are' is redundant; only 'there are' is needed.

× So, umm, all the time it's not work to me because umm, get distracted from my list, from my list.

✓ So, umm, all the time it doesn't work for me because, umm, I get distracted from my list.

The phrase 'it's not work' is incorrect; it should be 'it doesn't work' to express present tense negative. Also, the subject 'I' is missing before 'get distracted'. 'To me' is better expressed as 'for me' in this context.

× I think, I think that they thought making this is a time consuming task and they just go straight to the job they want to be done.

✓ I think that they think making this is a time-consuming task and they just go straight to the job they want to be done.

The verb 'thought' is past tense but the context is present opinion, so 'think' is correct. Also, 'time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as an adjective.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone. Absolutely, because, you know, the phone nowadays have a lot of function to remind me about my tasks.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone. Absolutely, because, you know, phones nowadays have a lot of functions to remind me about my tasks.

'The phone' is singular but the meaning is general, so 'phones' plural is better. Also, 'have' agrees with plural 'phones'. 'Function' should be plural 'functions' to match 'a lot of'.