列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和用词不够准确，且句子结构较为重复。建议注意冠词的使用（如a very organized person），避免重复表达，并使用更准确的词汇（如products而非productions）。

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because I am an organized person. It helps me remember everything I need to buy and saves time. My mother also advised me to write the list clearly to avoid mistakes.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，如“clearly to do some works”不自然。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态和表达方式，避免双重否定。

範例: Yes, I always make a timetable for my work. It helps me manage my tasks efficiently and meet deadlines. I follow the schedule strictly, so it works well for me.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，如主谓不一致（people who doesn't），表达不够自然。建议使用更简洁的句子，避免重复，并提供更具体的理由。

範例: I think some people dislike making lists because they prefer flexibility and don't want to be restricted by plans. As a result, they might be less punctual and less organized.

建議: 回答中有语法和表达不完整的问题，如“don't usually use my because will attract my attention”。建议完整表达原因，使用连贯的句子，并注意代词的使用。

範例: I prefer making lists on paper because using my phone during work can be distracting. Writing on paper helps me focus and clearly see what tasks I need to complete.

× I usually make a list when I shop so I can make sure every productions that I can make.

✓ I usually make a list when I shop so I can make sure every product that I can make.

这里的“productions”是复数形式，但句意应为“每个产品”，应使用单数形式“product”。

× my mom told me you should do it very clearly too.

✓ my mom told me you should do it very clearly too.

此句中“you”用法不当，应该用“I”来指代自己，即“my mom told me I should do it very clearly too.”。

× I usually make a timetable or schedule on my desk so I can clearly to do some works on time.

✓ I usually make a timetable or schedule on my desk so I can clearly do some work on time.

“clearly to do”结构错误，应去掉“to”，改为“clearly do”。“works”应为不可数名词“work”。

× I don't think it doesn't work because I usually follow these rules to do and I can do it well.

✓ I don't think it doesn't work because I usually follow these rules and I can do it well.

“follow these rules to do”结构不完整，应去掉“to do”，改为“follow these rules”。

× some people who doesn't like making this is they don't like to follow their routes or plans,

✓ some people who don't like making this are they don't like to follow their routes or plans,

“people”是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“don't”。

× some people who doesn't like making this is they don't like to follow their routes or plans,

✓ some people who don't like making this don't like to follow their routes or plans,

句子结构混乱，“is they”不合适，应直接连接两个否定句。

× I prefer to make a list on paper because during my work time I don't usually use my because will attract my attention.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because during my work time I don't usually use my phone because it will attract my attention.

句中缺少“phone”一词，且“because will attract”缺少主语，应为“because it will attract”。

× But if you write in the paper, you can clearly know what should you do.

✓ But if you write on paper, you can clearly know what you should do.

“write in the paper”应为“write on paper”，且疑问句语序“what should you do”在陈述句中应改为“what you should do”。