列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains redundancy. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly stating whether you make a list and under what circumstances. Use linking words to improve coherence and avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

範例: I don't always make a list, but when I plan to buy many items, especially groceries, I usually write one to stay organized.

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas and explain why making lists helps you at work.

範例: When I have a busy period at work, I always make a list because it helps me remember my tasks and manage my time effectively.

建議: Your answer is repetitive and unclear. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid repeating phrases. Use linking words to connect your reasons logically.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they have good memories and find writing lists unnecessary and time-consuming.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to complete your sentences and explain your preference clearly. Use linking words to add supporting details.

範例: I prefer making lists on paper because it's easier for me to check items while shopping, and I don't have to worry about my phone's battery.

× I don't make a list of 10 but sometimes I make because when I want to buy more things, maybe in the grocery and other shops shops I make a list and write some.

✓ I don't make a list of 10, but sometimes I do because when I want to buy more things, maybe in the grocery and other shops, I make a list and write some down.

The phrase 'shops shops' is a repetition error and should be corrected to a single 'shops'. Also, the sentence lacks clarity and proper conjunctions; adding a comma and 'do' improves the sentence structure and clarity.

× Sometimes I have more complicated period. It's work. When I have more jobs I always make a list because it's very good memories for me and never.

✓ Sometimes I have a more complicated period at work. When I have more jobs, I always make a list because it helps me remember well and I never forget.

The phrase 'more complicated period' needs an article 'a' and clarification 'at work'. 'It's work' is unclear and should be integrated properly. 'It's very good memories' is incorrect; 'it helps me remember well' is clearer. 'and never' is incomplete and needs completion for clarity.

× Because I think some people have good memories and they don't need to make a list and it's extra work and don't like, doesn't like, sorry.

✓ Because I think some people have good memories and they don't need to make a list; it's extra work and they don't like it.

The sentence has inconsistent pronoun usage and verb agreement. 'don't like, doesn't like' is confusing; it should be 'they don't like it' to agree with the plural subject 'people' and to complete the thought.

× I prefer to make a list on paper because it's easy for me. When I'm do to the shopping, I can check my list and.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because it's easy for me. When I go shopping, I can check my list.

'I'm do to the shopping' is grammatically incorrect; the correct phrase is 'I go shopping'. The sentence ending with 'and' is incomplete and should be finished or removed for clarity.