列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is a bit unclear and repetitive. Try to give a direct response first, then add specific details using linking words to make your answer coherent. Avoid repeating words and keep your sentences concise and natural.

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because I often forget items. For example, I list daily essentials like milk and bread, which helps me remember everything I need.

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about how making lists helps your work performance.

範例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me organise my daily tasks efficiently. As a result, I complete my work on time and improve my productivity.

建議: Your answer has repetition and unclear phrasing. Try to express your ideas clearly and use linking words like 'because' and 'moreover' correctly. Also, avoid redundancy and keep sentences concise.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because it takes time, and they prefer to focus on tasks directly. Moreover, they may find lists unnecessary or restrictive.

建議: Your answer is understandable but has many hesitations and unclear phrases. Try to speak smoothly and use linking words to explain your preference clearly and naturally.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is always with me. In this technological era, using a phone is convenient and helps me check my list anytime, anywhere.

× Well, as I am as I forgot to bring things from the market, I usually make the list instead of it, which helps me to recall the.

✓ Well, since I sometimes forget to bring things from the market, I usually make a list instead, which helps me to recall the items.

The original sentence has redundant and confusing structure with repeated phrases 'as I am as I forgot' and unclear reference 'instead of it'. Simplifying the sentence and clarifying the meaning improves comprehension and grammatical correctness.

× Recall the products or products like daily products or daily usage products or dairy products which helps me to recall and.

✓ I recall products like daily use items, which helps me remember what to buy.

The original sentence is incomplete and repetitive with unclear phrasing 'daily products or daily usage products or dairy products'. Correcting it to a clear, complete sentence with proper noun phrases improves clarity and grammar.

× Yes of course I do make a list for for my work as it helps me to complete my all task of my daily routine and which help which enhance the my performance of my performance to make my future bright and secure.

✓ Yes, of course I make a list for my work as it helps me complete all my tasks in my daily routine and enhances my performance to make my future bright and secure.

The original sentence has plural and singular mismatches such as 'my all task' instead of 'all my tasks' and 'which help which enhance' which is incorrect. Correcting these to proper singular/plural forms and verb agreement improves grammatical accuracy.

× I think some people don't doesn't like to make a list because of, because of, because making of list is time consuming and moreover people do not waste their time in unnecessary works as in the making list or something else.

✓ I think some people don't like to make a list because making a list is time-consuming, and moreover, people do not want to waste their time on unnecessary tasks like making lists or other things.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'don't doesn't' which is a modal verb error. Also, 'making of list' is incorrect; it should be 'making a list'. Correcting modal verb usage and article usage improves the sentence.

× I prefer to make list on my phone as as in as there are as there. In technological era, phones are with everyone at the place, at any place, so it's important to check phone.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because, in this technological era, phones are with everyone everywhere, so it's important to check the phone.

The original sentence has incorrect and redundant prepositions and unclear phrasing like 'as as in as there are as there' and 'at the place, at any place'. Correcting prepositions and sentence structure clarifies the meaning and improves grammar.