列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to avoid filler words like 'Yeah' and improve sentence structure for clarity. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and correct minor grammar errors such as 'where the pen are sold' to 'where the pens are sold'.

範例: Yes, I usually make a list before shopping because it helps me stay organized and avoid buying unnecessary items. For instance, if I need to buy pens, I can go straight to the stationery section without wasting time.

建議: Avoid hesitation sounds like 'MMM' and filler words such as 'yeah'. Use clearer sentence structures and linking words like 'firstly', 'then' to improve coherence. Also, correct phrases like 'with me to do' to 'I have to do'.

範例: Yes, I often make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized. For example, when I have many tasks, I follow the list by doing the most important task first, then the second, and so on.

建議: Avoid vague phrases like 'making this' and incorrect expressions such as 'very trouble' and 'weight you'. Use clearer vocabulary and linking words like 'however' properly. Try to explain reasons more specifically.

範例: I think some people dislike making lists because they find it troublesome. However, not making a list can cause more problems later when they forget important tasks.

建議: Improve grammar by saying 'I prefer to make a list on paper'. Avoid repetition like 'I even I can even'. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid filler words like 'Yeah'. Also, correct 'forgot' to 'forget'.

範例: I prefer to make lists on paper because I don't like using my phone much. Sometimes, I don't even bring my phone when I go out, so having a paper list is more reliable for me.

× if I want to buy a pen, I just need to go directly to where the pen are sold.

✓ if I want to buy a pen, I just need to go directly to where the pens are sold.

The noun 'pen' should be plural 'pens' because it refers to the general place where multiple pens are sold. In English, when talking about a category or multiple items, the plural form is used. This is a singular and plural issue.

× if there are so many important things with me to do, I just need to follow the list and do the most important thing first, and then the second one, the third one.

✓ if there are so many important things for me to do, I just need to follow the list and do the most important thing first, and then the second one, the third one.

The phrase 'with me to do' is incorrect; it should be 'for me to do' to indicate tasks assigned or relevant to the speaker. This is a prepositional error but also relates to clarity in plural context. However, since 'with me' is incorrect preposition usage, it is better corrected as 'for me'.

× if there are so many important things with me to do, I just need to follow the list and do the most important thing first, and then the second one, the third one.

✓ if there are so many important things for me to do, I just need to follow the list and do the most important thing first, and then the second one, the third one.

The preposition 'with' is incorrectly used here. The correct preposition is 'for' to indicate tasks that belong to or are assigned to the speaker. This is an incorrect use of prepositions.

× making a list is very trouble.

✓ making a list is very troublesome.

The word 'trouble' is a noun, but here an adjective is needed to describe 'making a list'. The correct adjective is 'troublesome'. This is an incorrect use of adjectives.

× the trouble will weight you in the subsequent process.

✓ the trouble will weigh you down in the subsequent process.

The verb 'weight' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'weigh'. Also, the phrase 'weigh you down' is an idiomatic expression meaning to burden someone. This is an incorrect use of quantifiers and verb choice.

× Actually, I prefer make a list on the paper and bring it with me because I'm not a person who loves the phone very much.

✓ Actually, I prefer to make a list on paper and bring it with me because I'm not a person who loves the phone very much.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by 'to' plus the base verb, so 'prefer to make' is correct. Also, 'on the paper' should be 'on paper' as the general medium. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and verb form.

× Sometimes I forgot to bring it.

✓ Sometimes I forget to bring it.

The verb tense should be present tense 'forget' to match the adverb 'sometimes' which indicates habitual action. This is a present tense issue but also relates to quantifier usage with time expressions.