列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时语法和表达不够自然，建议使用更地道的表达方式，并注意冠词和介词的使用。

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go to the store to make sure I don't forget anything.

建議: 回答结构不够清晰，句子不完整，建议直接回答问题并用连词连接细节，使表达更连贯。

範例: Yes, I make lists not only for work but also for daily tasks. For instance, I write down vegetables and fruits to avoid forgetting them.

建議: 表达中存在语法错误，词汇使用不准确，建议使用更准确的词汇和句型表达观点。

範例: I think some people dislike making lists because they have a strong memory and can remember things easily.

建議: 回答较好，但最后一句语法错误，建议注意主谓一致和时态的正确使用。

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more efficient and convenient. For example, I can easily add or delete items anytime, and the list is always with me.

× Yes, when I go into shop I always write something I want to buy in the list.

✓ Yes, when I go into a shop I always write something I want to buy on the list.

这里缺少冠词“a”，因为“shop”是可数名词，单数形式前需要冠词。

× Yes, when I go into shop I always write something I want to buy in the list.

✓ Yes, when I go into a shop I always write something I want to buy on the list.

介词“in”用在“list”前不合适，正确的搭配是“on the list”，表示在清单上。

× In fact, not only work, but also daily routine.

✓ In fact, not only work, but also daily routine tasks.

“daily routine”作为名词短语时不完整，需加名词“tasks”使表达完整。

× For example, I usually write down some vegetables, fruits on the list to avoid forgetting them.

✓ For example, I usually write down some vegetables and fruits on the list to avoid forgetting them.

“vegetables, fruits”之间缺少连词“and”，使句子更通顺。

× In my opinion they have a good brain with strong memory.

✓ In my opinion, they have good brains with strong memories.

“brain”和“memory”应使用复数形式，因为指的是多个人的脑和记忆。

× They are good at memory everything.

✓ They are good at memorizing everything.

“memory”是名词，动词短语应使用“memorize”及其动名词形式“memorizing”。