列表— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you make a list when you shop?
考生
Certainly, and I always make a list when I go to shop because I don't want to waste too much time on shopping. So I always make a list and to remember what I need and go to buy it.
考官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
考生
Certainly, I always make a list in my study. You know, I am a junior student in a university, so my schedule is very crowd. I need at least to help me and to know what should I do. It is very important and it does work.
考官
Why don't some people like making lists?
考生
I think making list is not helpful to everyone. Sometimes if someone makes a list, the list may be limited him or her to do the things what he wants to do.
考官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
考生
I tend to prepare a list on my phone because make a digital list is very convenient to correct it and I can also easy to record it and know what I do all day and save it.
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
分數: 70.0建議: 你的回答表达了观点，但句子结构有些重复且不够自然。建议简化句子，避免重复表达，并使用更地道的表达方式。
範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list to save time and ensure I don't forget anything important.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
分數: 65.0建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议注意句子结构，使用正确的时态和词汇，并且使表达更连贯。
範例: Yes, as a university junior, I always make lists to organize my busy schedule. They help me stay focused and manage my tasks effectively.
Why don't some people like making lists?
分數: 60.0建議: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议加强语法练习，使用更准确的句型，并且提供更具体的理由。
範例: Some people dislike making lists because they feel restricted and prefer to be more spontaneous in their activities.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
分數: 65.0建議: 回答中存在语法和表达不自然的问题。建议使用更简洁的句子结构，并注意动词形式和连贯性。
範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient to edit and helps me keep track of my daily tasks easily.
文法
× I need at least to help me and to know what should I do.
✓ I need at least some help and to know what I should do.
这里缺少了名词help的量词，应该用some help表示一些帮助，而不是直接用动词help。
× I think making list is not helpful to everyone.
✓ I think making a list is not helpful to everyone.
list是可数名词，单数形式前需要加冠词a。
× Sometimes if someone makes a list, the list may be limited him or her to do the things what he wants to do.
✓ Sometimes if someone makes a list, the list may limit him or her from doing the things that he wants to do.
动词limit后面应接宾语和介词from，表示限制某人做某事；同时关系代词what应改为that。
× I always make a list in my study.
✓ I always make a list for my study.
表示目的时，应该用介词for而不是in。
× my schedule is very crowd.
✓ my schedule is very crowded.
crowd是名词，形容词应为crowded，表示“拥挤的”。
× make a digital list is very convenient to correct it and I can also easy to record it and know what I do all day and save it.
✓ making a digital list is very convenient to correct, and I can also easily record it, know what I do all day, and save it.
动词make应改为动名词making；形容词easy应改为副词easily；句子结构需要调整使其更通顺。
× I tend to prepare a list on my phone because make a digital list is very convenient to correct it and I can also easy to record it and know what I do all day and save it.
✓ I tend to prepare a list on my phone because making a digital list is very convenient to correct, and I can also easily record it, know what I do all day, and save it.
动词make应改为动名词making，表示原因状语。
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