列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it ends abruptly and lacks a proper conclusion. Try to complete your sentences fully and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything important. For example, by having a list, I can quickly find what I need and save time, which makes the whole process more efficient. Moreover, this way I avoid buying unnecessary items and save money.

建議: Your answer is relevant but lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to form complete sentences and explain your ideas more clearly. Use linking words to improve coherence.

範例: Yes, I always make a list for my work, and it works very well for me. This is because making a list helps me complete all my tasks in order, which increases my productivity and reduces stress.

建議: Your answer is understandable but repetitive and slightly unclear. Try to use varied vocabulary and clearer sentence structures. Also, avoid repeating the same idea multiple times.

範例: I think some people don't like making lists because they feel it wastes time at the moment. They believe that lists won't help them or provide any real benefit, so they prefer not to make them.

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains minor grammatical errors and repetition. Try to use complete sentences and avoid repeating words unnecessarily. Also, add linking words for better flow.

範例: Well, I prefer to make lists on my mobile phone because it is easy to carry and always with me. On the other hand, if I make a list on paper, I might forget it at home or lose it somewhere.

× This way I avoid buying unnecessary items and.

✓ This way I avoid buying unnecessary items.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and' which is a conjunction requiring a following clause. This creates a sentence structure error. To correct, remove the conjunction 'and' to complete the sentence properly.

× Yes I always make list especially for work and it really work a lot for me because making a list for work is like you are doing your all the work or chores in the order if you know.

✓ Yes, I always make lists especially for work and they really work a lot for me because making a list for work is like you are doing all your work or chores in order, if you know.

The word 'list' should be plural 'lists' to match the context of repeated action. Also, 'it really work' should be 'they really work' to agree with the plural subject 'lists'. Additionally, 'your all the work' is corrected to 'all your work' for natural word order.

× Yes I always make list especially for work and it really work a lot for me because making a list for work is like you are doing your all the work or chores in the order if you know.

✓ Yes, I always make lists especially for work and they really work a lot for me because making a list for work is like you are doing all your work or chores in order, if you know.

The pronoun 'it' refers to 'list' which should be plural 'lists', so the pronoun should be 'they' to agree in number. Also, 'your all the work' is an incorrect pronoun and article order; it should be 'all your work'.

× That's why I think they consider it not making lists.

✓ That's why I think they consider not making lists.

The phrase 'consider it not making lists' is incorrect because 'consider' is followed directly by the gerund phrase without 'it'. Removing 'it' corrects the sentence structure.

× Well, I prefer to make list on my mobile phone because it is easy to carry and it it is always with me.

✓ Well, I prefer to make lists on my mobile phone because it is easy to carry and it is always with me.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' to indicate the general action of making multiple lists. Also, the repeated 'it' is a typographical error and corrected by removing the duplicate.

× Yes, I usually make a list when I go to shopping because it helps me stay organized and ensure I don't forget anything important.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything important.

The phrase 'go to shopping' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go shopping' without the preposition 'to'. Also, 'ensure' should be 'ensures' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× Yes, I usually make a list when I go to shopping because it helps me stay organized and ensure I don't forget anything important.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything important.

The verb 'ensure' must be in third person singular form 'ensures' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× If I make a list on paper, it may forget at home or it can be lost anywhere.

✓ If I make a list on paper, I may forget it at home or it can be lost anywhere.

The subject 'it' (the list) cannot 'forget'; the person forgets the list. So 'it may forget' is incorrect. It should be 'I may forget it'. Also, 'forget at home' needs the object 'it' to clarify what is forgotten.