列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答不够自然且有语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并用具体细节支持观点。

範例: I rarely make a shopping list because I prefer to shop spontaneously. For example, last week I went shopping without a list and bought what I felt like at the moment.

建議: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，缺少连贯性。建议完整表达观点，使用连接词使回答更流畅。

範例: Yes, I make lists to organize my work. For example, during my final week last year, I had many tasks and sometimes forgot things, but making a list helped me remember everything.

建議: 表达混乱且语法错误严重，观点不明确。建议简洁明了地说明原因，并用具体例子支持。

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they have a good memory and prefer to remember tasks mentally. Others think making lists is unnecessary or feel lazy to write them down.

建議: 回答较为自然，但句子结构不够完整，表达略显重复。建议使用更准确的表达和连接词。

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more convenient. I can check it anytime and even share my plans with friends if needed.

× Well, for me making a list is just once in blue moon.

✓ Well, for me making a list is just once in a blue moon.

短语“once in a blue moon”需要加冠词“a”，表示“很少发生”。缺少冠词导致表达不完整。

× Last week I do MTI personality test.

✓ Last week I did the MTI personality test.

描述过去发生的事情时，动词应使用过去式“did”。此外，“MTI personality test”前应加定冠词“the”。

× It turned out that I'm ENFP and peace with my procedure.

✓ It turned out that I'm ENFP and at peace with my personality.

短语应为“at peace with”，表示“与……和谐相处”。“procedure”应为“personality”，符合语境。

× Last week I do MTI personality test.

✓ Last week I did the MTI personality test.

同上，描述过去事件应使用过去时。

× Well, if my memory serves me right it is what's around one years ago.

✓ Well, if my memory serves me right it was around one year ago.

“one year”应为单数形式，且“it is”应改为过去时“it was”，与时间状语一致。

× At that time it was in my final week.

✓ At that time, it was my final week.

“was in my final week”表达不自然，改为“was my final week”更符合英语习惯。

× I have a lot of work to do and sometimes I will forgot some things, but if I.

✓ I had a lot of work to do and sometimes I would forget some things, but if I...

描述过去情况时，动词应使用过去时态，“forgot”应为“forget”的过去式，“will”应改为“would”表示过去的习惯或可能性。

× I think there are several reasons behind someone just make a list as a habit and other things make lists where lots of them time because they have a good memory, they can remember all these things without to write it down.

✓ I think there are several reasons behind why some people just make a list as a habit, and others make lists a lot of the time because they have a good memory; they can remember all these things without writing them down.

“someone”应为复数“some people”以匹配谓语，“where lots of them time”表达不清，改为“a lot of the time”。“without to write it down”应改为“without writing them down”，动词不定式用法错误。

× And also there's one thing that's like myth so lazy and I just have no plan just.

✓ And also there's one thing that's like a myth: being lazy and just having no plan.

表达不完整且语法混乱，需补充冠词“a myth”，并调整结构使句子通顺。

× Well, for me I would like to say I prefer to make a list on the reason why that is.

✓ Well, for me I would like to say I prefer to make a list on paper; the reason why is that...

“make a list on the reason why that is”结构错误，应补充“on paper”表示“在纸上”。

× Making on the phone will be more conveniently and it can be checked every time.

✓ Making a list on the phone is more convenient and can be checked anytime.

“conveniently”是副词，需用形容词“convenient”修饰“is”。“Making on the phone”缺少宾语“a list”。

× Also I can share the plan with my friend if necessary.

✓ Also, I can share the plan with my friends if necessary.

“friend”应为复数“friends”，表示可以分享给多个朋友，更符合语境。