列表— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you make a list when you shop?
考生
Yes, because I have a short memory, so to remember the things I always write down the things. There's an app on my phone called To Do List, so I write, so I write there.
考官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
考生
Yes I make a list for my work because I have so many tasks to do in my work and as a front end cashier or the supervisor I have so many tasks to do. So to manage my task I write down all my tasks like I have to do check the price, check and count the cash. Also I have two.
考官
Why don't some people like making lists?
考生
According to me, I think they have a strong memory sense that's why they don't like to making list. Also maybe they don't have much time to do to do the list because for example if someone work in a warehouse.
考官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
考生
I always prefer to make a list on my phone because it is very convenient to me as I always bring my phone with myself. Also, if I need to go anywhere, my phone's always with me and I can easily remember the things and I can write down the things in my phone easily.
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
分數: 65.0建議: Try to make your answer more concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details using linking words to improve coherence. For example, mention the app once and explain why it helps you.
範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because I have a short memory. For instance, I use an app called To Do List on my phone, which helps me remember everything I need to buy.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
分數: 60.0建議: Your answer is a bit repetitive and unclear at the end. Try to organize your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, using linking words to connect ideas. Avoid incomplete sentences and clarify your points.
範例: Yes, I make lists for my work because I have many tasks as a front-end cashier and supervisor. For example, I write down tasks like checking prices and counting cash to manage my responsibilities effectively.
Why don't some people like making lists?
分數: 55.0建議: Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your reasons. Also, avoid grammatical errors and provide complete examples to support your points.
範例: I think some people dislike making lists because they have a strong memory and prefer to remember tasks mentally. Additionally, they might be too busy, such as warehouse workers, who don't have time to write lists.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
分數: 70.0建議: Your answer is clear but a bit repetitive. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and avoid repeating similar phrases. Also, use varied vocabulary to express convenience and habit.
範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient; I always carry it with me. Therefore, I can easily jot down and remember tasks wherever I go.
文法
× I think they have a strong memory sense that's why they don't like to making list.
✓ I think they have a strong memory sense that's why they don't like making lists.
The verb 'like' should be followed by the gerund form 'making' rather than the infinitive 'to making'. Also, 'list' should be plural 'lists' to match the context of general preference.
× I think they have a strong memory sense that's why they don't like to making list.
✓ I think they have a strong memory sense that's why they don't like making lists.
The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general concept of making lists, not a single list.
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