列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了观点，但语言有些不自然，且句子结构稍显混乱。建议使用更地道的表达方式，并注意时态一致性，同时避免重复。

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything important.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题。建议使用完整句子，注意时态和主谓一致，并且用连接词使句子更连贯。

範例: Yes, I have a lot of work to do, so I always make a list to remind myself of my tasks. It really helps me stay organized and complete everything on time.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不准确的问题，且部分词汇使用不当。建议加强语法基础，使用更准确的词汇，并且使句子更连贯。

範例: I think some people dislike making lists because they don't have many tasks and prefer to remember them mentally. Also, lists can sometimes make people feel stressed, so they avoid using them.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题。建议注意动词形式和句子结构，使用更自然的表达方式。

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because technology has made digital devices very convenient. For instance, I can easily add or delete notes and set reminders on my phone.

× I work around clock almost every day so I must make this to remind me the things I need to do and it really worked.

✓ I work around the clock almost every day so I must make this to remind me of the things I need to do and it really worked.

这里缺少冠词“the”，短语应为“around the clock”，表示“全天候”。另外，动词“remind”后应加介词“of”，表示提醒某事。

× I work around clock almost every day so I must make this to remind me the things I need to do and it really worked.

✓ I work around the clock almost every day so I must make this to remind me of the things I need to do and it really worked.

动词“remind”后面应接介词“of”，表示提醒某事。

× Well, I think first of all, some people don't have so much things to do, so they just need to remember their task in their mind.

✓ Well, I think first of all, some people don't have so many things to do, so they just need to remember their tasks in their mind.

“much”用于不可数名词，“things”是可数名词，应该用“many”。“task”应为复数“tasks”，与“things”对应。

× Besides, I think that A list make people feel pressure, so some of them don't like making this and they prefer a bounty.

✓ Besides, I think that a list makes people feel pressure, so some of them don't like making it and they prefer a bounty.

主语“a list”是单数，谓语动词应加-s，变为“makes”。“making this”中的“this”指代不明确，改为“it”更合适。

× Besides, I think that A list make people feel pressure, so some of them don't like making this and they prefer a bounty.

✓ Besides, I think that a list makes people feel pressure, so some of them don't like making it and they prefer a bounty.

代词“this”用法不当，指代不明确，应该用“it”来指代前面的“a list”。

× Well, I definitely am going to using the phone because as the development of the technology, the digital devices are getting more and more convenient.

✓ Well, I am definitely going to use the phone because with the development of technology, digital devices are getting more and more convenient.

“going to”后应接动词原形“use”，而不是动名词“using”。“as the development of the technology”应改为“with the development of technology”，表示随着技术的发展。

× Well, I definitely am going to using the phone because as the development of the technology, the digital devices are getting more and more convenient.

✓ Well, I am definitely going to use the phone because with the development of technology, digital devices are getting more and more convenient.

“the technology”前的冠词“the”不必要，通常说“technology”时不加冠词。

× For example, I can easily delete or add a note on my phone and set reminder.

✓ For example, I can easily delete or add a note on my phone and set reminders.

“reminder”应为复数形式“reminders”，因为通常会设置多个提醒。