列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more concise and clear. Start with a direct response, then add specific details using linking words to improve coherence. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors.

範例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping. For example, when my mum and I shop for the whole month, I list all the items we need, especially those that have run out completely.

建議: Respond directly and clearly. Use linking words to connect ideas and improve flow. Also, correct grammar and use natural phrasing to sound more fluent.

範例: Although I am a student, I make lists for my studies. For instance, when I prepare for exams, I create a detailed list of topics for each subject to organise my revision.

建議: Avoid vague words like 'reckoning' and filler phrases such as 'you know'. Use clearer vocabulary and structure your answer with linking words to explain your opinion logically.

範例: I think some people dislike making lists because of their personal preferences or moods. However, I believe lists are useful because they help organise plans and remember important tasks.

建議: Make your answer clearer and more structured. Use correct tenses and avoid incomplete sentences. Link your ideas logically and be specific about your preference.

範例: A few years ago, I used paper to make lists, whether for groceries or study. However, now I prefer using my mobile phone because I always have it with me, making it more convenient.

× When I plan to go to the shop for getting the total materials for the whole month with my mom and then I try to make a list of all the items that I needed for the whole month, especially the items that is totally finished.

✓ When I plan to go to the shop to get the total materials for the whole month with my mom, I try to make a list of all the items that I need for the whole month, especially the items that are totally finished.

The phrase 'for getting' is incorrect; the correct form is 'to get' as an infinitive after 'plan to go'. Also, 'that I needed' should be 'that I need' to maintain present tense consistency. 'Items that is totally finished' should be 'items that are totally finished' to agree in number with the plural noun 'items'.

× especially the items that is totally finished.

✓ especially the items that are totally finished.

The subject 'items' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number.

× Actually I am a student not a professional worker. So however I also make list for my studies purposes.

✓ Actually, I am a student, not a professional worker. However, I also make lists for my study purposes.

The phrase 'So however' is redundant; 'However' alone is sufficient. 'Make list' should be 'make lists' to indicate plural or countable noun. 'Studies purposes' should be 'study purposes' as 'study' is the correct adjective form here.

× So however I also make list for my studies purposes.

✓ However, I also make lists for my study purposes.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to multiple lists. Also, 'studies purposes' is incorrect; 'study purposes' is the correct adjective-noun combination.

× For instance, if I prepare for my exams then I make proper list for my major or special subject that has the upcoming exam.

✓ For instance, if I prepare for my exams, then I make a proper list for my major or special subject that has an upcoming exam.

A comma is needed after 'exams' to separate clauses. 'Proper list' needs an article 'a'. 'The upcoming exam' should be 'an upcoming exam' because it is not a specific exam already known.

× Well, from my perspective it depends upon their reckoning, their moods.

✓ Well, from my perspective, it depends on their reckoning and their moods.

A comma is needed after 'perspective'. The phrase 'depends upon' is acceptable but 'depends on' is more common. 'Their reckoning' is unusual; 'their thinking' or 'their opinion' might be clearer, but as per instruction, only grammar issues are corrected. Also, 'and' is better than a comma here to connect the two nouns.

× But making list is more beneficial as compared to not making list.

✓ But making a list is more beneficial compared to not making a list.

The noun 'list' needs the article 'a' to be grammatically correct. 'As compared to' is wordy; 'compared to' is sufficient.

× For me it is a better way to ensure your planes and your you know important things.

✓ For me, it is a better way to ensure your plans and, you know, important things.

Comma needed after 'For me'. 'Planes' is a spelling error; it should be 'plans'. Commas added around 'you know' as it is a parenthetical phrase.

× To be honest, few years ago I use paper for making list whatever it may be.

✓ To be honest, a few years ago I used paper for making lists, whatever they may be.

'Use' should be past tense 'used' to match 'few years ago'. 'Few' should be 'a few' to indicate some quantity. 'List' should be plural 'lists' to match 'whatever they may be'.

× The grocery shop list are my study purpose list.

✓ The grocery shop lists are my study purpose lists.

'List' should be plural 'lists' to agree with plural verb 'are'. 'Study purpose list' should be plural 'study purpose lists' to match the context.

× But I used to know currently I used mobile which is you know every time with us.

✓ But I used to know, currently I use a mobile phone which is, you know, always with us.

'Used' should be present tense 'use' to indicate current habit. Added commas for clarity. 'Mobile' should be 'mobile phone' for clarity. 'Every time with us' is awkward; 'always with us' is more natural.

× So I prefer mobile phone for making list which is.

✓ So I prefer using a mobile phone for making lists.

Sentence is incomplete and awkward. Added 'using' to indicate preference. 'List' should be plural 'lists' to match context.