列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn, đồng thời nên dùng các liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và logic hơn.

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because I find it hard to remember everything I need. It helps me avoid confusion when choosing groceries or clothes, ensuring I buy only what is necessary.

建議: Bạn nên cải thiện cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.

範例: Yes, I make lists on my phone to keep track of my homework and tasks. This method helps me manage my time efficiently and ensures I don't forget important assignments.

建議: Câu trả lời cần được sắp xếp lại cho rõ ràng hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp để diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách tự nhiên và dễ hiểu.

範例: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they feel restricted by them. They prefer to be spontaneous and follow their own desires without feeling pressured.

建議: Bạn cần hoàn thiện câu trả lời bằng cách sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và diễn đạt ý tưởng rõ ràng, mạch lạc hơn.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it reminds me anytime and anywhere. Although I can't always carry my phone, it's more convenient and practical than paper lists.

× I also make a list on my as the reminders because I can't remember many things at the same time.

✓ I also make a list on my phone as reminders because I can't remember many things at the same time.

The phrase 'on my' is incomplete and missing the object 'phone'. Also, 'as the reminders' should be 'as reminders' without 'the' to be grammatically correct.

× It always makes me confused with choices and what I need to buy for groceries and clothing or food.

✓ It always makes me confused about choices and what I need to buy, such as groceries, clothing, or food.

The preposition 'with' is incorrect here; 'confused about' is the correct phrase. Also, the list of items needs clearer separation and wording.

× I need to make a list on my phone that is a reminder to remind me what I need to do and my homework and see work efficiently.

✓ I need to make a list on my phone that serves as a reminder to tell me what I need to do, including my homework, so I can work efficiently.

The phrase 'see work efficiently' is incorrect; it should be 'work efficiently'. Also, 'that is a reminder to remind me' is redundant; 'that serves as a reminder' is better.

× From my perspective, because people don't want to be restricted and to be shaped with their choices when they make a list.

✓ From my perspective, people don't want to be restricted or shaped by their choices when they make a list.

The preposition 'with' is incorrect; 'shaped by' is the correct phrase. Also, the sentence structure is improved by removing 'because' and combining the ideas.

× They want to be themselves and immerse in their world what they want to do and maybe make they annoyed and a little bit pressured.

✓ They want to be themselves and immerse in their world, doing what they want to do, and maybe feel annoyed and a little bit pressured.

The phrase 'make they annoyed' is incorrect; it should be 'feel annoyed'. Also, the sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× I prefer making lists on my because it's such as a reminder that reminds me every time and everywhere.

✓ I prefer making lists on my phone because it's like a reminder that reminds me all the time and everywhere.

The phrase 'on my' is incomplete without 'phone'. 'Such as' is incorrect here; 'like' is appropriate. 'Every time and everywhere' is better expressed as 'all the time and everywhere'.

× Make king list on my is so convenient and practical, but I can't bring my phones everywhere and I can also conveniently watch it.

✓ Making lists on my phone is so convenient and practical, but I can't bring my phone everywhere, so I can't always check it conveniently.

The phrase 'Make king list on my' is a typo and incorrect structure; it should be 'Making lists on my phone'. 'Phones' should be singular 'phone'. 'Watch it' is incorrect; 'check it' or 'access it' is better.