列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid incomplete sentences and redundancy.

範例: I usually make a list when I go grocery shopping because I often forget items like garlic or chives. However, for other types of shopping, I might not use a list as much.

建議: Improve sentence structure and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Be more precise and avoid informal phrases like 'like' and 'gonna'.

範例: I usually set goals before the day starts to have a clear plan. However, plans often change, so I make a list but don't always follow it exactly.

建議: Focus on completing your sentences and avoid filler words such as 'like'. Use linking words to explain your ideas clearly and provide specific examples.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because their work is flexible and unpredictable. For example, artists often need to adjust their schedules due to unexpected events.

建議: Use correct grammar and avoid informal language like 'gonna'. Clarify your points and use linking words to make your answer coherent. Also, correct the word 'sing' to 'sync'.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's easier to access them anytime. Unlike paper lists, which can be lost, phone lists can be synced with my computer for convenience.

× It really depends on what kind of shopping that I was intend to do that day.

✓ It really depends on what kind of shopping I intended to do that day.

The verb 'intend' should be in the past tense 'intended' to match the past time reference 'that day'. Using 'was intend' is incorrect because 'intend' is not used in continuous form here.

× if I gonna go like grocery shopping, yes, there's probably have a list,

✓ if I am going to go grocery shopping, yes, there is probably a list,

'Gonna' is informal and should be replaced with 'am going to' for correct modal verb usage. Also, 'there's probably have a list' is incorrect; it should be 'there is probably a list' to correctly use 'there is' and avoid mixing with 'have'.

× there's probably have a list,

✓ there is probably a list,

The phrase 'there's probably have a list' is incorrect because 'there is' should not be followed by 'have'. The correct structure is 'there is' followed by a noun phrase.

× But on the other hand is the.

✓ But on the other hand, it is the opposite.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a subject and verb. Adding 'it is the opposite' completes the thought and corrects the sentence structure.

× what you gonna do for the rest of the day.

✓ what you are going to do for the rest of the day.

'Gonna' is informal and should be replaced with 'are going to' for proper modal verb usage in formal speech.

× their work are very flexible and have very like unexpected things happen.

✓ their work is very flexible and has very unexpected things happen.

The subject 'work' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' not 'are'. Also, 'have' should be 'has' to agree with the singular subject. The phrase 'very like' is incorrect and should be 'very' only.

× like artists like they need adjust their schedule to two different reasons.

✓ like artists, they need to adjust their schedule for two different reasons.

The verb 'need' should be followed by 'to' plus the base verb 'adjust'. Also, 'to two different reasons' should be 'for two different reasons' to use the correct preposition.

× I prefer make a list on my phone because it's easier to see what's going on at the moment,

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's easier to see what's going on at the moment,

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by the infinitive form 'to make' rather than the bare verb 'make'.

× but with people you're probably gonna toss it somewhere else and you don't really remember it.

✓ but with paper, you're probably going to toss it somewhere else and not really remember it.

The word 'people' is incorrect here; it should be 'paper' to make sense in context. Also, 'gonna' should be 'going to' for formal correctness.

× And with all the records on the phone, you can easily sing it with your computer.

✓ And with all the records on the phone, you can easily sync it with your computer.

The word 'sing' is a typo or incorrect word choice; it should be 'sync' meaning to synchronize data between devices.