列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy and improving sentence structure. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me manage my budget effectively. Without a list, I might forget some items or overspend.

建議: Your answer is clear but could be improved by using more natural phrasing and linking words. Also, avoid repeating the same idea and try to provide a specific example or reason.

範例: Yes, I always make a to-do list for my work because it helps me stay organised and ensures I complete all my tasks on time.

建議: Your answer has repetition and grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid repeating phrases. Use linking words to connect your points logically.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they believe it's unnecessary and prefer to remember everything mentally. They feel confident that they won't forget anything without writing it down.

建議: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to express your preference clearly and provide reasons with proper sentence structure. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone rather than on paper because it's more convenient and I can easily access and update the list during my next visit to the market.

× a shopping list helps me to maintain an accurate usage of expenses or money that I have set aside to buy buy materials in the market.

✓ a shopping list helps me to maintain an accurate record of expenses or money that I have set aside to buy materials in the market.

The phrase 'usage of expenses' is incorrect because 'usage' is not typically used with 'expenses'. The correct term is 'record of expenses'. Also, 'buy buy materials' contains a repeated word 'buy', which is a typographical error. The correction improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Because if I do not make a list, I might not be able to get the list materials.

✓ Because if I do not make a list, I might not be able to get the listed materials.

The phrase 'list materials' is incorrect; it should be 'listed materials' to indicate the materials that are on the list. This is a singular/plural and adjective form issue where the past participle 'listed' functions as an adjective.

× Yes, making a list for my work is a very important schedule for my daily activities because this helps me to keep track of how I achieve my daily activities.

✓ Yes, making a list for my work is a very important part of my daily schedule because it helps me keep track of how I complete my daily activities.

The original sentence has awkward phrasing: 'important schedule' is incorrect; it should be 'important part of my daily schedule'. Also, 'how I achieve my daily activities' is better expressed as 'how I complete my daily activities'. The correction improves sentence structure and clarity.

× Some persons do not like do not like making lists because they feel that it's not necessary and they can carry everything they want to buy in their memory.

✓ Some people do not like making lists because they feel that it's not necessary and they can carry everything they want to buy in their memory.

The word 'persons' is less common and sounds unnatural in this context; 'people' is the correct plural noun. Also, the phrase 'do not like do not like' is a repetition error. The correction removes redundancy and uses the appropriate pronoun.

× So making a list do not actually make them to forget anything they want to buy as they can actually achieve whatever they want to do.

✓ So making a list does not actually make them forget anything they want to buy as they can actually achieve whatever they want to do.

The subject 'making a list' is singular, so the verb should be 'does not' instead of 'do not'. Also, 'make them to forget' is incorrect; the verb 'make' is followed by the base form without 'to'. The correction fixes subject-verb agreement and verb form.

× I personally prefer to make a list on my phone than on paper because my phone will help me to retain the list in case of next.

✓ I personally prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on paper because my phone will help me retain the list for the next time.

The phrase 'in case of next' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'for' as in 'for the next time'. Also, 'prefer ... than' should be 'prefer ... rather than'. The correction addresses preposition and comparative structure errors.

× Because of next visit to market, it will help me so that I can make use of the list in case of.

✓ Because of the next visit to the market, it will help me so that I can make use of the list.

The original sentence is incomplete and awkward. It lacks the definite article 'the' before 'next visit' and 'market'. The phrase 'in case of' is incomplete and unnecessary here. The correction completes the sentence and improves clarity.