列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like "things that are needed for shopping" and improve sentence structure for better flow. Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list to stay organized. However, sometimes I end up buying extra items that aren't on the list because they catch my eye.

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use clearer sentence structures and linking words to explain your habits more effectively.

範例: I don't often make lists for work; I usually keep tasks in my mind. However, for important deadlines, I set reminders to ensure I complete them on time.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but could be more concise and natural. Avoid repeating similar ideas and use linking words to connect your points logically.

範例: It depends on the person. Some prefer making lists because they find it hard to remember tasks, while others with sharp memories don't feel the need to write things down.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and lacks clarity. Try to complete your thoughts fully and organize your answer with clear sentences. Use linking words to explain your preferences clearly.

範例: I use both paper and my phone for lists. At home, I prefer sticky notes on the fridge to remind me of kitchen tasks. When I'm out, I rely on my phone's reminder apps to keep track of things.

× I buy the things those are not mentioned in the list.

✓ I buy the things that are not mentioned in the list.

The pronoun 'those' is incorrectly used here. The correct relative pronoun to refer to 'things' in this context is 'that'. Using 'that' properly connects the clause describing the things not mentioned in the list.

× I need to complete on a specific time.

✓ I need to complete at a specific time.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect when referring to a specific time. The correct preposition is 'at' for specific times (e.g., at 3 PM, at a specific time).

× It depends on the nature of person, because some people find it difficult to remember the thing, so they usually prefer to make notes.

✓ It depends on the nature of the person, because some people find it difficult to remember things, so they usually prefer to make notes.

The phrase 'nature of person' is missing the definite article 'the'. Also, 'the thing' should be plural 'things' to match the general meaning. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical correctness.

× They never forget their important jobs, so they do not like to make a list of the things.

✓ They never forget their important jobs, so they do not like to make a list of things.

The phrase 'a list of the things' is awkward because 'the things' is too specific here. Removing 'the' makes it more natural and general, which fits the context better.