列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: In English (Cambodia), try to make your answer clearer and more organized. Start with a direct answer, then explain why you make a list. Avoid repeating ideas and unclear phrases like 'prepare my fun organizing'. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I sometimes make a list when I shop because it helps me remember what I need to buy. Moreover, it allows me to organize my shopping better and avoid forgetting important items.

建議: In English (Cambodia), focus on clear sentence structure and correct word choice. For example, use 'list' instead of 'lace' and 'lost plan' should be 'a detailed plan'. Also, use linking words to explain why making a list helps you at work.

範例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because I cannot remember everything. Therefore, I create a detailed plan for my whole day, especially in the morning, to know what tasks I need to do.

建議: In English (Cambodia), try to use correct grammar and clearer expressions. For example, say 'Some people might not like making lists because they think it wastes time.' Also, explain reasons logically and use linking words like 'because' and 'sometimes'.

範例: Some people might not like making lists because they think it wastes their time. Sometimes, it is also because they have poor time management or do not organize their work properly.

建議: In English (Cambodia), try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid unclear phrases. For example, say 'I prefer to make lists on my phone because I can carry it everywhere.' Use linking words to explain why using a phone is convenient.

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I can carry it everywhere and check it anytime. Nowadays, with modern technology, using a phone is very convenient for organizing my shopping.

× Some people might don't like making lists because they think that making a list can waste their time to make it, and sometimes it's because of their no time management or unorganized work properly.

✓ Some people might not like making lists because they think that making a list can waste their time to make it, and sometimes it's because of their poor time management or unorganized work.

The modal verb 'might' should be followed by the base form of the verb without 'do/does'. So 'might don't' is incorrect; it should be 'might not'. Also, 'no time management' is incorrect; it should be 'poor time management' to express lack of skill. Additionally, 'unorganized work properly' is awkward; 'unorganized work' is better.

× Yes, I always do lace for my work because now I have a lost plan.

✓ Yes, I always make lists for my work because now I have a lot of plans.

The word 'lace' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'list'. Also, 'lost plan' is incorrect; it should be 'a lot of plans' to indicate multiple plans. The plural form 'lists' fits better with the context.

× Yes, I sometime make a list when I shop because it helps me to remember saying that I'm going to buy and it's helped me to prepare my fun organizing and properly.

✓ Yes, I sometimes make a list when I shop because it helps me remember what I'm going to buy and it has helped me prepare and organize properly.

The phrase 'remember saying that I'm going to buy' is incorrect; it should be 'remember what I'm going to buy'. Also, 'prepare my fun organizing and properly' is unclear and incorrect; it should be 'prepare and organize properly'. 'Sometimes' needs an 's' for adverb of frequency.

× I prefer to make this on my phone because I can take it to it or look it everywhere.

✓ I prefer to make this on my phone because I can take it with me or look at it everywhere.

The phrase 'take it to it' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'with me'. Also, 'look it everywhere' is incorrect; it should be 'look at it everywhere' because 'look' requires the preposition 'at' when followed by an object.

× I know now it's modern technology shopping for my hand. I'll touch the phone every minute so you can help them.

✓ I know now it's modern technology at my hand. I touch my phone every minute so it can help me.

'Shopping for my hand' is incorrect; it should be 'at my hand' or 'in my hand' to indicate possession. 'I'll touch the phone every minute' is better as 'I touch my phone every minute' to indicate habitual action. 'You can help them' is incorrect pronoun usage; it should be 'it can help me' referring to the phone.