列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了观点，但存在语法错误，如“can helps”应为“can help”。建议注意动词形式的正确使用，同时可以增加一些具体细节，使回答更丰富。

範例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember all the items I need. For example, last week I bought ingredients for a new recipe, and the list ensured I didn't forget anything.

建議: 回答中有语法错误，如“can helps”应为“can help”，以及口语缩写“def”不够正式。建议使用更准确的语法和适当的词汇，同时可以用连接词使句子更连贯。

範例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me keep track of unfinished tasks. In fact, it definitely works well for me since I can prioritize my duties effectively.

建議: 回答较为简洁，建议增加连接词使句子更流畅，同时可以提供更多具体原因或例子来丰富内容。

範例: I think some people don't like making lists because they prefer a casual lifestyle and don't want to be controlled by strict schedules. For instance, they might enjoy spontaneity and flexibility in their daily routines.

建議: 回答中“its”应为“it's”，注意缩写的正确使用。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，并且可以具体说明为什么手机或笔记本更方便。

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone or in my notebook because it's easier to edit them. For example, I can quickly add items I forgot without starting over, which makes the process more efficient.

× I think a list can helps me remember the things that I want to buy.

✓ I think a list can help me remember the things that I want to buy.

助动词can后面应接动词原形，不能加s。这里helps应改为help。

× I think it can helps me remember the tasks I haven't completed.

✓ I think it can help me remember the tasks I haven't completed.

助动词can后面应接动词原形，不能加s。这里helps应改为help。

× It's def definitely works well for me.

✓ It definitely works well for me.

句中It和works之间不应有副词def，且def是口语缩写，应改为definitely，且去掉It's。

× I prefer to make a list on my phone or in my notebook because I think its easier to edit and I can add something that I forgot every time.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone or in my notebook because I think it's easier to edit and I can add something that I forgot every time.

its应为it is的缩写it's，表示“它是”，这里需要使用缩写形式。