列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is relevant but can be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I usually make a list when I go grocery shopping because I manage my kitchen alone. This helps me remember all the small items I need and avoid forgetting anything.

建議: Try to answer directly and clearly. Improve grammar and sentence structure. Use linking words to explain your points logically.

範例: I don't often make lists for work because I work at an Indian restaurant. Usually, my manager gives me tasks in writing, so I follow those instructions to complete my work efficiently.

建議: Clarify your ideas and avoid confusing phrases. Use linking words to contrast opinions and provide clear reasons.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they think it takes too much time to write down tasks. However, I believe lists help us stay productive and complete all tasks on time without forgetting anything.

建議: Your answer is good but can be more fluent and natural. Use linking words to compare preferences clearly.

範例: It depends on the situation. I usually use the notes app on my iPhone for quick lists, but for study-related lists, I prefer writing them in my diary because I find it more effective.

× Sometime yes, mostly in the case of the groceries, as I have to manage my kitchen by my own only.

✓ Sometimes yes, mostly in the case of groceries, as I have to manage my kitchen by myself only.

The phrase 'by my own' is incorrect; the correct reflexive pronoun is 'by myself'. Also, 'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes' to indicate frequency.

× So whenever I go for a grocery shopping I often make a list as it's quite difficult to remember the little things for my kitchen.

✓ So whenever I go grocery shopping, I often make a list as it's quite difficult to remember the little things for my kitchen.

The phrase 'go for a grocery shopping' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'go grocery shopping' without 'for' and 'a'.

× Work Not very often as I work at an Indian restaurant so I don't require to make any list for my work.

✓ Not very often, as I work at an Indian restaurant, so I don't need to make any list for my work.

The sentence starts with 'Work Not very often' which is incorrect structure. It should be 'Not very often'. Also, 'require to make' is incorrect; 'need to make' is appropriate here.

× My manager often handed me some task by writing and doing the piece of the papers and by taking into consideration that I often work at my office.

✓ My manager often hands me some tasks by writing on pieces of paper, and taking that into consideration, I often work at my office.

The verb 'handed' should be in present tense 'hands' to match 'often'. 'Some task' should be plural 'some tasks'. 'Doing the piece of the papers' is incorrect; it should be 'writing on pieces of paper'.

× I think that some people believe that it is quite time consuming task as it will take around a lot of time to sleep getting what task we have to do to make a list.

✓ I think that some people believe that it is quite a time-consuming task as it will take a lot of time to think about what tasks we have to do to make a list.

'Time consuming task' needs an article 'a' and hyphen 'time-consuming'. 'Around a lot of time' is incorrect; 'a lot of time' is correct. 'Sleep getting' is incorrect; it should be 'think about'.

× But I think that by making a list we can be more productive.

✓ But I think that by making a list, we can be more productive.

A comma is needed after the introductory phrase 'by making a list' for clarity.

× We will be able to do all the tasks on the time instead of missing anything.

✓ We will be able to do all the tasks on time instead of missing anything.

The phrase 'on the time' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'on time' without 'the'.

× It totally depends.

✓ It totally depends.

This sentence is correct and needs no correction.

× I love to do writing but whenever you have to make any list, I often use notes on my iPhone.

✓ I love writing, but whenever I have to make any list, I often use the Notes app on my iPhone.

'Love to do writing' is awkward; 'love writing' is better. 'Whenever you have to' should be 'whenever I have to' to maintain first person. 'Notes' should be specified as 'the Notes app'.

× But if I had to make a list for something like let it to my study or for the education purpose, at that time I prefer to use my diary for making a list.

✓ But if I had to make a list for something like my studies or for educational purposes, at that time I prefer to use my diary for making a list.

'Let it to my study' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'my studies'. 'For the education purpose' should be 'for educational purposes'.