列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了观点并给出了例子，但有语法错误和表达不够自然，如“makes me easier for me”应改为“makes it easier for me”。建议注意句子结构，避免重复词汇，使表达更流畅。

範例: Yes, I usually prepare a shopping list before I go shopping because it makes it easier for me to stay organized and avoid forgetting important items. For example, when I shop for groceries, having a list helps me save time and buy only what I really need.

建議: 你的回答结构清晰，内容具体，表达较自然。但可以使用更多连接词使句子更连贯，如“because”和“for example”之间可以加上“so”。

範例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because I have many tasks to complete when opening and closing the restaurant. So, making a list helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything important. For example, I write down cleaning duties and inventory checks to make my job easier.

建議: 回答中有拼写错误（leads应为lists）和语法错误（feel it unnecessary应为feel it is unnecessary）。建议注意单词拼写和句子完整性，同时使用连接词如“because”和“therefore”使逻辑更清晰。

範例: I think some people don't like making lists because they feel it is unnecessary. For example, one of my friends believes it's a waste of time since he can remember everything in his head; therefore, he feels he doesn't need to write things down.

建議: 回答中时态使用不当（if I had应为if I have），表达不够自然，且有语法错误（more easier应为easier）。建议注意时态一致，避免重复表达，并使用正确的比较级形式。

範例: Usually, if I have a pen or paper beside me, I prefer to make a list on paper because when I was a student, I always wrote notes or made lists in class. So, I am used to making lists on paper. It's easier to write down anything I want this way.

× It makes me easier for me to stay organised and avoid forgotten important items.

✓ It makes it easier for me to stay organised and avoid forgetting important items.

这里需要使用动名词形式"forgetting"，因为动词"avoid"后面应接动名词，而不是过去分词"forgotten"。另外，"makes me easier"应改为"makes it easier"，因为"make"后面需要有形式主语"it"。

× It's more easier to write anything I want.

✓ It's easier to write anything I want.

"more easier"是冗余表达，"easier"已经是比较级，不能再加"more"。应直接使用"easier"。

× I think some people don't like making leads because they feel it unnecessary.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists because they feel it unnecessary.

这里"making leads"应为"making lists"，因为题目和上下文都在谈论制作清单，"leads"用词错误。

× they feel it unnecessary.

✓ they feel it is unnecessary.

"feel"后面需要有系动词"is"来连接表语，缺少"is"导致句子不完整。

× Usually if I had a pen or paper beside me, I prefer to make a list on paper because when I was a student I always wrote a memory or make a list in class.

✓ Usually if I have a pen or paper beside me, I prefer to make a list on paper because when I was a student I always wrote a memory or made a list in class.

条件句中表示习惯应使用一般现在时"have"，而不是过去时"had"。另外，"make a list"应与前文时态一致，改为过去时"made a list"。

× So I get used to make a list on paper.

✓ So I am used to making a list on paper.

"get used to"后应接动名词形式，故"make"应改为"making"。同时，表达习惯时常用被动形式"am used to"。