列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了观点，但句子结构较为重复且有语法错误，建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并注意时态和词汇的准确使用。

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list to ensure I buy everything I need and avoid unnecessary expenses.

建議: 回答内容清晰，但句子中有语法错误，如“all the works”应为“all the work”，建议注意不可数名词的使用，并尝试使用连接词使表达更流畅。

範例: Yes, I always make a checklist for my work because it helps me complete all my tasks efficiently and saves time.

建議: 回答较长且句子结构混乱，建议分句表达观点，使用连接词使逻辑更清晰，同时注意主谓一致和词汇搭配。

範例: I think some people dislike making lists because they find it hard to create a perfect one. Also, they may feel restricted and prefer to act spontaneously.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子，注意介词和被动语态的正确使用，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is easy to carry and less likely to be lost compared to paper.

× Yes, I always do make a checklist when I go purchase because I'd love to use the list to check that all the things I have to buy have purchased, and the list can make sure that I would not spend much more money on other necessary things.

✓ Yes, I always make a checklist when I go shopping because I'd love to use the list to check that all the things I have to buy have been purchased, and the list can make sure that I do not spend much more money on unnecessary things.

动词短语“go purchase”不正确，应该用“go shopping”表示去购物。这里的“do make”冗余，直接用“make”即可。句中“have purchased”应改为“have been purchased”以符合被动语态。最后，“other necessary things”应改为“unnecessary things”以表达不想多花钱买不必要的东西。

× Yes, I always make the checklist for my work. I think it's really helpful for me because it can ensure that I have finished all the works I have to do and it can always save my time.

✓ Yes, I always make a checklist for my work. I think it's really helpful for me because it can ensure that I have finished all the work I have to do and it can always save me time.

“the checklist”应改为“a checklist”，因为这里指的是泛指一个清单。名词“works”用法不当，应该用不可数名词“work”表示工作。短语“save my time”应改为“save me time”，更符合英语习惯。

× As a people who love to make a list, I guess that someone who doesn't like making the list, they feel difficult to make a perfect list and also that they organize all the things in the list, they feel not very free, they more prefer to follow their hearts to do the things.

✓ As a person who loves to make a list, I guess that someone who doesn't like making lists feels it is difficult to make a perfect list and also to organize all the things in the list. They don't feel very free and prefer to follow their hearts to do things.

“As a people”应改为“as a person”，因为“people”是复数。句中“someone...they”主谓不一致，应统一为单数或复数。动词“feel difficult”应改为“feels it is difficult”以符合语法。句子过长且结构混乱，需拆分并调整表达。

× Well, I more prefer to make the list on my phone. Firstly because the phone is easily to carry by me and I always take my phone everywhere and what's more important, on the phone cannot be lost. But if I wired on the paper, the paper is easily be lost by me, so its phone is more convenient for me.

✓ Well, I prefer to make the list on my phone. Firstly, because the phone is easy for me to carry and I always take my phone everywhere. What's more important is that the phone cannot be lost. But if I write on paper, the paper can easily be lost by me, so the phone is more convenient for me.

“more prefer”错误，动词“prefer”本身已表示比较，不需要“more”。“easily to carry by me”应改为“easy for me to carry”。“wired on the paper”应为“write on paper”。“easily be lost by me”应为“can easily be lost by me”。句子结构需调整使表达更清晰。