列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和表达不够自然，存在语法错误，如“help me to don't forget”应改为“help me not to forget”。建议简化句子结构，避免语法错误，同时增加连贯性。

範例: Yes, I usually make a list before going shopping because it helps me remember everything I need to buy and saves time.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“help me and remember how much work did I complete”应改为“help me remember how much work I have completed”。建议使用更自然的表达，并避免重复。

範例: Yes, I always make a list to keep track of my tasks and deadlines. It really helps me stay organized and complete my work on time.

建議: 回答表达不清，语法错误较多，句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，明确表达观点，并使用连词使句子更连贯。

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they feel it limits their freedom and can be time-consuming or inconvenient.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然，如“as me”应为“for me”，“on papers”应为“on paper”。建议简化表达，避免口语填充词，增强句子流畅性。

範例: For me, I definitely prefer making lists on paper because I enjoy the traditional feel and it helps me focus better.

× I think a great list can help me to don't forget something I will buy.

✓ I think a great list can help me not to forget something I will buy.

动词不定式中，'help me to don't forget'是不正确的，应该用'help me not to forget'，即在to后面用动词原形，否定词not放在to前面。

× I always make a list to help me and remember how much work did I complete and the deadline.

✓ I always make a list to help me remember how much work I have completed and the deadline.

句子中'how much work did I complete'是疑问句结构，作为宾语从句应使用陈述句结构，即'I have completed'，同时保持时态一致。

× I think it's work.

✓ I think it works.

'work'作为动词时，第三人称单数应加s，且此处表示一般现在时，故用'works'。

× It's work for me.

✓ It works for me.

同上，动词work需加s以符合第三人称单数形式。

× but make a list always come give some struggle and it doesn't convenient to some peoples.

✓ but making a list always brings some struggle and it isn't convenient for some people.

'make a list always come give some struggle'结构不正确，应改为动名词短语'making a list'作主语，动词用单数形式'brings'。'doesn't convenient'应为' isn't convenient'，'to some peoples'应为'for some people'，people是复数，不加s。

× it doesn't convenient to some peoples.

✓ it isn't convenient for some people.

'peoples'错误，'people'本身是复数形式，不加s；'doesn't convenient'应为' isn't convenient'，形容词前用be动词。

× Oh, as me, it's definitely, I prefer to make a list on paper.

✓ Oh, for me, it's definitely that I prefer to make a list on paper.

'as me'用法错误，表达个人观点应使用'for me'。

× It's very traditional things and I think, umm, when I write something on papers, I'm very enjoying that time and at that moment I think on paper is very great.

✓ It's a very traditional thing and I think, umm, when I write something on paper, I really enjoy that time and at that moment I think paper is very great.

'things'应为单数'thing'，'papers'应为不可数名词'paper'，'I'm very enjoying'错误，正确表达为'I really enjoy'，'on paper is very great'应为'paper is very great'。