列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答较简短且表达不够自然，建议使用更地道的表达方式，并且补充具体细节来丰富内容。

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember all the items I need, especially groceries that I might forget otherwise.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题，建议使用完整句子并且更清晰地表达因果关系。

範例: Yes, I make a to-do list for my work. It helps me stay organized and gives me a sense of accomplishment when I complete tasks, which reduces my stress.

建議: 语法错误较多，表达不够流畅，建议注意动词形式和句子结构，同时用更自然的表达方式。

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they trust their memory and prefer shopping spontaneously without any restrictions.

建議: 回答较长但表达不够简洁，存在语法错误，建议简化句子结构并注意时态和冠词的使用。

範例: I prefer making lists on paper when I study because I can easily check them with my books. However, when shopping, I use my phone since I can add or change items anytime.

× People don't like to making this because they think they are good in memory things so they don't feel the need to plan ahead and they like to shopping without restrictions.

✓ People don't like making this because they think they are good at remembering things so they don't feel the need to plan ahead and they like shopping without restrictions.

动词后面接动名词时，通常用动词的-ing形式，但在“like to making”中，'to'后面应接动词原形或动名词，这里应去掉'to'，改为'like making'。另外，'good in memory things'表达不正确，应改为'good at remembering things'，'like to shopping'应改为'like shopping'。

× People don't like to making this because they think they are good in memory things so they don't feel the need to plan ahead and they like to shopping without restrictions.

✓ People don't like making this because they think they are good at remembering things so they don't feel the need to plan ahead and they like shopping without restrictions.

介词使用错误，'good in memory things'应改为'good at remembering things'，因为习惯搭配是'good at'表示擅长某事。

× I do make a list when I shop because it helps me to buy the things I don't remember.

✓ I do make a list when I shop because it helps me buy the things I don't remember.

动词不定式中，'helps me to buy'中的'to'可以省略，英语中常用'help sb do sth'结构，更简洁自然。

× Yes, I make a list for my work. It works because when I finish a list I will feel satisfied and reduce. It will reduce my stress.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work. It works because when I finish a list, I feel satisfied and it reduces my stress.

句子结构不完整，'and reduce'缺少主语，应改为'and it reduces'，时态应保持一致，'will feel'改为一般现在时'feel'，因为描述习惯性动作。

× I prefer to make a list on paper when I am study because it would help me to check the list on my books but I would like to make a list on my phone when I am shopping because it can be changed anytime and added anytime.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper when I study because it helps me check the list in my books, but I like to make a list on my phone when I am shopping because it can be changed and added anytime.

'when I am study'中动词形式错误，应为'when I study'。'would help'改为一般现在时'helps'，因为描述习惯性动作。'help me to check'中的'to'可省略。'would like to make'改为'like to make'，保持时态一致。